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Reviews for Family Time COMPLETED

By : yamiyugi23
  • From Elfin69 on July 16, 2011
    I loved this fic and hope that you will do a continuation fic showing Harry finding his mate since is a submissive elf. Please keep up with your wonderful writing.
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  • From bloodshound on June 16, 2011
    I only have one pick... what about the chunk of voldi in Harry's head... and the other bits of him scattered about? Iit's possible harry lost when he got his elfin makeover but what about the rest? Oh well, if Voldi pops up again they can wack him again... pffft ahaha. mental image. Instead of wack a mole... wack a Vole...di. :P
    It would only be good for 5 more times though. ^^
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  • From jujukitty on December 29, 2010
    glad to see another chapter! a lot of spelling/grammar issues though, the biggest one i saw being the use "his" for "he's", "his" is possessive (his car) "he's" is an action "he is...". keep up the good work, i look forward to more and hope you have a good new years.
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  • From wrench19 on December 29, 2010
    ahhh i think harry is ubber dubber cute in your story. i was wondering if you to a story alert for your story if so plz send me a message via adult mail and i'll then give you my e-mail. thanks and ten points!!!
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  • From purefaith91 on December 21, 2010
    I am one of those that thinks that Albus is senile or just oblivious to the world around him unless it fits into his agenda. Love that you put the Cullens recognizing the riff raff when they see it and surrounding Harry to keep him safe. Maybe he can summer in Forks instead of revisiting those creeps that are laughingly called his family. Great so far. p
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  • From HeartStar on November 28, 2010
    Ok hun I love your style as is but I love chanc=ge too I look forward to what you bring... Did you have as nice thanks Giving?
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  • From fairytopian on November 19, 2010
    don't worry i think all your fics are great, even with the different writing styles. Its part of what makes you unique.
    doing great
    ~F:;
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  • From jujukitty on November 19, 2010
    i'm really enjoying this story, and the whole bit with the dursley's getting fitted was great. hope you feel better and things get settled down for you. can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work :)
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  • From reamane21 on November 19, 2010
    A update thank you and i want to know will the headmaster get wind of this and what happen to harry. Also as you did before you should make the Dureslys the most hated family at hogwarts.
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  • From angelnomiko on November 12, 2010
    wow that was awsome .. i love it.. please please update soon i would love to read what will happen to the dursley's... later for now

    angel
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  • From spk on September 02, 2010
    OMG! Such a unique story idea. I can't wait to see what all happens with the Dursleys at Hogwarts. I feel so sorry for Harry. Love that you had Rosalie notice Harry first...nice twist with their attachment to him. :)
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