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Reviews for Carnival

By : kstargal
  • From blondpierogi on September 06, 2010
    ohhh my..what a juicy chapter and cliffhanger...
    i cannot wait to read about what happens next??? i will be patiently (not) waiting for a new chapter!!!! lol
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  • From ANON - witchinghour185 on September 06, 2010
    oOo new chapter !!!! that was quick ! and delightfull ! love the chapter and evil!jonathan, he knew ??? and he told them the truth. why do i feel a Mr&Mrs Smith kind of relationship to come for draco and hermione ? i would love to see them make team together against the bad guy.

    now i want to know who is the woman in black ? surely not hermione ( draco would have seen the shoes under her skirt ?) no?

    (thumb up for the sex scene, hot ! well done )

    i can't wait for next chapter ! please keep going .
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 06, 2010
    This has a whole James Bond feel to it which I love, whether that's your intention or not, I don't care, love the whole intrigue and action fast pace of it. Reckon if I get myself one of those skirts I can get Draco to hide under it too? LMAO If only. LOL As for the end though, how dare you finish it there, like that. I want more. Well done!!
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on September 05, 2010
    wow! a load of danger with a bit of hot foreplay (really hot). so johnny boy knew who they were and knows more than they do. you offically have me at the edge of my seat. please update soon.
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  • From JadeLucky on September 05, 2010
    OOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!!!!! Cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From JadeLucky on September 05, 2010
    Wow. Didnt see that twist comig. :)
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  • From flamingmoth on September 05, 2010
    Oooh, exciting! In more ways than one! :)
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  • From straightlyconfused on September 05, 2010
    I really like where this story is going.... its very interesting.

    Straight
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  • From margaritama on September 05, 2010
    that was sexy and very imaginative. but how did Jonathon get to them so quickly? was he watching them? poor Hermione
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  • From dracoschick007 on September 05, 2010
    Oh my what a great chapter!!! I wonder who or what gave Jonathon his information? It's all very interesting and I can't wait for another update!!!
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  • From ANON - anon on September 05, 2010
    I'm enjoying this! You have a great plot, a very good grasp of the characters (they're not horribly OOC) and no glaring grammar errors. Thank you for sharing what promises to be a fabulous story. I'm looking forward not only to more chapters, but to giving your story a second reading once it's finished.
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  • From flamingmoth on September 04, 2010
    Oh, this is fun :) Looking forward to the rest!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2010
    What a great twist - how interesting that both Hermione and Draco are out for Johnathon, only one has been sent to kill and the other to bring him in peacefully (not sure how peacefully). LOL I was sure Hermione had recognised Draco under the guise of his "Black Knight" outfit too, but you tricked me there as well. Very intriguing. Can't wait for more. :)
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  • From ANON - witchinghour185 on September 03, 2010
    that was great !!! i can't wait for what's next, please keep writing, it was so intriguing, intense, and well done. standing ovation !
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on September 03, 2010
    HOLD IT! hermione is a member of CMOA too! wait if both hermione and draco are members of CMOA and both have missions that involve that johnathan guy why is hermione is only suppose to capture and draco is to kill. what is CMOA plans for this supposed "criminal"? i only know that if hermione and draco don't shag before getting this guy it will really put clitch in the shagging.
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