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Reviews for Carnival

By : kstargal
  • From margaritama on September 03, 2010
    Oh, they are working against each other....OH MY! And her little secret desires...how delish. I'm sure Draco would be more than up to the task.
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  • From JadeLucky on September 02, 2010
    Loving it already. This has the potential to be great. :) Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Rosamund on September 02, 2010
    Very intriguing opener!
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  • From Insolence on September 01, 2010
    All right... "Jonathans leaving" should be "Jonathan's leaving", and you have a major problem with comma placement ("Herbert, another man in her party wouldn
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on September 01, 2010
    i love a good chase. mostly a car chase but i like these chase if they have promise. and this chase does. who will win? and will hermione find out the truth about and her client?
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  • From redrain520 on September 01, 2010
    i loved it! very good indeed, i cant wait too read more...

    your a really good writer, i am not so good at garmmer and that sort of thing..but i have a beta :)


    so its all good..i did have my fanfic on fanfiction.net but they took it down for its explict content..lol

    i was up too 12 chapters on the site too, well now im rewriting it on here and already got chapter 1 up :) i just hope i did a good job
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  • From dracoschick007 on September 01, 2010
    Oh what a great start to a great story!!!! Love it very much and I can't wait to read what happens next!!!
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  • From Ravengirl7 on September 01, 2010
    Interesting! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From straightlyconfused on September 01, 2010
    This is a very good start. Very well written.
    Keep it up!
    Straight
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2010
    Two chapters beta'd - well come on, where's the other one? Loved it, can't wait for more. :)
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