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Reviews for Carnival

By : kstargal
  • From Trelweny on July 14, 2012
    Absolutely loved this! So carnal and hot, with such a passionate attraction beyond pure lust to boot! Kudos!

    Thanks so much for writing!
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  • From penenelliepie on June 27, 2012
    An utterly enjoyable story. Really liked your creative writing style.
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  • From AngelKayohisura on December 03, 2010
    Ohhhh, really, really good, fantastic smut! XD the plot line was good too! Although it was Hermione's and Draco's interactions with each other that really got me hooked, this was just good overall! Thank you for this, it really brightened my evening.
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  • From MIverson on September 19, 2010
    Wow! That's all I have to say at the moment. Just Wow!

    Cosmyk
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on September 13, 2010
    I am so sorry I wasn't here to review as you got the last couple chapters out. Darn vacation! NOT! lol I have enjoyed this story from the start. And, I will say the smut was absolutely necessary after all the build up. :-) Congrats on a job well done and thank you once more, HG4eva
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  • From blondpierogi on September 12, 2010
    great ending to a great story!!! Great job! i really enjoyed reading it!
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  • From ANON - Christopher on September 12, 2010
    MURDER MURDER YES IT IS GOOO.... NOT! The fact is that what Draco did at the end of this story was simply, plain and simple, MURDER. I can count 500 different way that he could have stopped her WITHOUT killing her. He should be locked up for the rest of his life, NOT with Hermione Granger, just as anyone who did this in REAL LIFE should be!

    That is the bottom line, blunt truth here.
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  • From JadeLucky on September 11, 2010
    Awesome story. Loved every second. :) Did not see it coming about Violet being Voldy's half sis.
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  • From Insolence on September 10, 2010
    Merlin's pants, woman... you should have warned me you'll be churning out chapters like that!

    You're on ADULTfanfiction - never, EVER apologze for the smut - it's bad form. BTW, the "Oh God. I fell asleep!" bit was a hoot! lol

    The whole "half-sister" thing was a nice twist, too.

    I loved the combination of wisecracking and fast-paced action. And I was rather pleased by the overall presentation once again: there's nothing worse than a good story riddled with bad grammar/style. Still a couple of punctuation issues to solve ("Violets shoulder length blonde hair, hung sleek and perfectly straight", anyone? Oh, and "What better place to start then wiping out both governments" is a question, while "then" is an adverb, not a conjunction. And you can't answer "But WOULD Hermione actually ask for it?" with "Yes, she COULD.") but, for the most part, you did your homework well.

    I'd honestly prefer less (ab)used lines than
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on September 09, 2010
    oh where to start? ok first off; i had a feeling about violet but thought i jumped to wrong conclusion and being moldy-butt's little half-sister was an excellent twist (evil and insanity must run in the family). second; i sure there have plenty of men who fell asleep before they get to the good stuff, especially after a long day of hard work. third; they could atleast showed up for 15 minutes at "their" ball, it was like of rude. fourth; loved the sex bit, gave me a VERY warm feeling inside. fifth; thank you for the kind words from your author's note. this was an amazing story.
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on September 09, 2010
    It was a very fun story to read.
    I will pass this onto hubby.
    He will enjoy it for many reasons.
    The storyline. It is a short story. It is complete. But most importantly it is complete and no nagging the wife for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 09, 2010
    Love that as a fellow Aussie I get to read this the moment you update. :)

    What can I say? How about - LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! I so didn't want this to end. I wondered if the myserious female was going to make another appearance. Wanted Hermione to officially put her in her place but Draco sorting her out wasn't too shabby at all. Way to make Violet crumble!! LOL (oh dear, that's the wine talking) LOL As for his proposition - hot damn! er, I mean, jolly decent of him, eh what? LOL I seriously enjoyed your story and I am thrilled that you got a laugh out of my comments. LOL Please, please, please, let your muses guide you to more excitingly decadent stories. :) SOON!! Thank you for sharing.
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on September 08, 2010
    love the last sentence of this chapter.
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on September 07, 2010
    through this whole i found myself picturing draco dressed as naruto. and from my point of view it was a funny image. this chapter also proves that even mental, a man is weak against a pair of tits (even gay guys can't ignore them). i can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 07, 2010
    Only one more? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Good thing the last chapter is full of promise (of which I know you will deliver). :)

    Another tension filled chapter, and squeee, I wondered if they were going to disappear down the trapdoor and they did, though I thought Hermione would be the one to think of it. I guess she has to be the damsel in distress sometimes. Sure took her turn to be the one in charge though. :) Aww I don't want this to end. Please tell me you have more stories lined up for when this one is over??????
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