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Reviews for Blood and Magic

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  • From mrequecky on September 08, 2010
    Ups :D Well, I wonder what happens next...
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  • From ANON - red713 on September 08, 2010
    I'm liking "Blood and Magic" so far and can't wait to see where it goes! I love HP/AB crossovers, but I don't think I've read one yet that takes place during the earlier books.
    Thanks for writing. :-)
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  • From ANON - TinyKoala on September 07, 2010
    First off, I'm a total sucker for Harry in St. Louis, so I was really happy to see this, and I'm really curious to see how it plays out. And you've done a really good job setting up the situation, but I do have some constructive criticism. First, in Chapter 1, the conversation with Hermione seemed to drag just a little bit; I think the dialogue could have been tweaked, until it was shorter, just a bit neater in places, if that makes sense. During that conversation too, there were very few sensory details, and we lost track of where Harry was, or what his new house looked like, or smelled, or any detail to really orient us. The second chapter felt much smoother--there were more details to clue us in, but there could always be more. I always love texture and scent details sprinkled throughout a scene, just to complete the set. But really, these are fairly minor technical issues and I absolutely love what you have up right now. The scene with Jean-Claude was just so much fun, and I really can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Yamikage on September 07, 2010
    Wow I love the chapter2 because we see J.C *_*
    From what i read, it's before J.C get anita as human servant. Maybe with Harry here, he will not need her. Better try to woo Harry -a powerful wizard- than that stupid girl >_
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  • From evanone on September 07, 2010
    I like it. There isn't enough ABVH and HP crossovers. I look forward to your future updates.
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  • From ANON - anon on September 07, 2010
    plz update, that last bit was hilarious!!
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  • From danawarner on September 07, 2010
    Poor Harry. Yeah, the early books were fun BUT Nikolaos (I think that's her name) was a bitch and the old Lupa, Raina & the pard leader, Gabriel were 3 individuals that just HAD to die. Raina & Gabriel did really gross snuff films before Anita killed them. Nikolaos treated the wererats like slaves.
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  • From doxiesmom14 on September 06, 2010
    awesome ... Love Jean Claude
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  • From ANON - shelby on September 06, 2010
    Really good so far please keep updating as quickly as you have been :) so I may have missed it but is there a set pairing so far?
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  • From danawarner on September 06, 2010
    I like it. Do more!
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  • From ANON - Mona on September 06, 2010
    I really like your story so far. There are just not enough Anita Blake/HP crossovers good luck and keep on write its great so far.
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  • From chris7100 on September 06, 2010
    Promising start! I look forward to reading more...
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  • From ANON - Jade on September 06, 2010
    Wonderful
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  • From ANON - reader on September 05, 2010
    OH MY GOD! This is a great story I honestly and eagerly am waiting on hands and knees ( not really but figuratively) to see what is going to happen next please keep it up and update real quickly!!! Cause this story is the best and I do honestly mean that!
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  • From pervyfaerie on September 05, 2010
    yes, a new ab/hp xover, love the start of this, cant wait to read more .. wonder who the pairing will be..
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