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Reviews for Things Fall Apart, But Then You Build Again

By : zeldaofarel
  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 13, 2013
    Reread some chapters, first time for the rest. Excellent story! Well done characterizations, easy enough to read (english & grammar) & a very good plot. Looking forward to the epilog a lot. I hope you change your mind and write more Harry/Draco.
    How do I get to drarry on facebook, adult or whatever it is?
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on September 13, 2013
    So I just got to chapter 3 and I can not read any further. All the Weasleys are so completly out of character that I can hardly stand it. I hate these storys were they are made to be these complete douche bags OUT OF NOWHERE!! I mean I see your 7 years but even then somebodys character does not do a complete 180. I will also be a bit leniant for douchebag!Ron but seriously? Mrs Weasley? Who is this woman?? We have never even got a HINT of this messed up personality. Is this the same careing and compasionate woman from the books? I think not. I mean I can understand if a potion/spell/ insert magical malady is affecting Ron and Ginny( who is certainly not staying home with the kids as she is " supposed" to)but really? All light wizards?? What about Tonks? and Madame Bones? and McGonnagal? and Sprout? and the frikken FOUNDERS??? Independent light wizards that were women yes??
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  • From ANON - snowangel88 on September 08, 2013
    Love this story, would LOVE to see more!
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  • From FaeChild on January 07, 2013
    All the makings of a perfect fic. I was laughing and yelling and crying with the characters. Even chapter.. 12 I believe. The one with the Vote, had my heart pounding as I read through Harry's decision. It's awesome and I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on January 03, 2013
    Chapter 1 thru 17 are winners! Ready for chapter 18 and more.
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  • From Bickymonster on January 03, 2013
    Hope you will continue to write this, really enjoyed reading it so far. Interesting take on the Light/Dark wizards thing and of course I want to know how everything pans out for them all. Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From slowroad on December 03, 2012
    I think it was absolutely brilliant. Now please please write more. I cannot wait to see Harry stick it to Ginny.
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  • From moodysavage on June 10, 2012
    yeah!!!! finally they know about being drugged!
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  • From TalisRuadair on June 10, 2012
    Ah so it was a repressive potion Harry and Hermione were both under. I would think that the members of the light would frown upon the fact that a female had used it against a male. I would hope as well that there's enough evidence in both of their cases that get Ron and Ginny back for the crap they pulled. I'm really a Hufflepuff at heart because of my strong feeling of justice and fairness, and I really want to see it served on a cold platter. I mean come on, she used it on a gay man so that she could force him into marriage and then cheated on him because the sex was bad. Hello, sweetie what do you expect? Then she has the audacity to think she would get all his money and the children just because of the new divorce laws he helped pass. I mean I'm sure that fidelity has to have some clause in there, right? He didn't cheat on her until after he decided to file for divorce, while she'd been participating in orgies for years in Thailand. Shouldn't her family shun her for her horrible behavior. I also wonder if Molly is under that same potion if Ron and Ginny knew about it, they would've had to have learned it from somewhere. Please tell me that Bill, Charley, and George aren't as bad as the rest of the Weasleys.I loved the sex scene. I mean I understand the warning but if someone is offended from your story on this sight when it's listed under slash M/M category with a Draco/Harry pairing, what could they expect besides some yummy smut. I loved the comment about if you're not putting a finger in my butt at some point than your doing it wrong. I shall continue to read on this site.
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  • From bloodshound on June 10, 2012
    and finally we get to the drarry point. is it legal for wholesale drugging of the populace?
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  • From ANON - Chester on June 05, 2012
    Please don't let Ron and Ginny win! It's so obvious that they did something! They can't get away with it - I mean doesn't poisoning your spouse and infedelity not hold up in Harry's defense - please - need a more positive ending here!
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 05, 2012
    Surely with Harry able to prove her "affairs" she'll get nothing.
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  • From moodysavage on June 04, 2012
    noooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she was unfaithful! did they put anything in there about divorce when one is unfaithful!? and she's been drugging him with juice... they need to blackmail her with that! arrrggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - s.kerley on May 27, 2012
    really great story. Love the plot
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  • From bloodshound on May 27, 2012
    *waves my team hedrarry flag in the background. take that you so called ;light; families.
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