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Reviews for Things Fall Apart, But Then You Build Again

By : zeldaofarel
  • From thrnbrooke on May 26, 2012
    Might bite them. Now Ginny can demand payment as well.
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  • From djaddict on May 20, 2012
    So, please tell me the whole drugging thing IS going to be revealed?
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 20, 2012
    Is a custody battle on the horizon? Sooo need more!!!
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  • From bloodshound on May 19, 2012
    finally Har's real plans can come into play. i hope he and the others are enough to stop the mind control juice and other disturbing things the so called 'light' is up to.
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  • From ANON - FredtheMan on May 19, 2012
    Harry needs to have a bit more of a backbone and confront Ginny about her behavior. She is not acting like a "Light" Witch should be, and she should be called out about that, maybe in the Prophet where Harry talks about how she has acted like a Dark Witch for years, despite her claims of being a Light Witch. I'd like Harry to tell Ginny she is not allowed to leave the country and must stay an act like a Light wife and mother, just to see how she would respond. Harry should also put a limit on Ginny's access to his money, before she bankrupts the Potter family.
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  • From moodysavage on May 19, 2012
    yeah!!! I'm so glad the vote is done.I'm like Harry... not sure it's going to really happen till it happens!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on May 15, 2012
    I read it all and this is very interesting! I feel bad that Hermione and Harry have apparently lost years of their lives to some calming potion in their juice that made them just go with the flow. But now I want more!!! But didn't it take Hermione like 6 months of the new diet to snap out of it and decide to divorce Ron? I thought Harry has been on the diet for quite a few months already too. Shouldn't he be snapped out of it and ready to divorce Ginny too?
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  • From djaddict on May 14, 2012
    Can't wait for the vote and aftermath!

    Really, really want SOMEONE to figure out that they have been drugged for years. Probably poor James too!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 13, 2012
    Harry should follow his wife one day to see exactly what she does. Makes me wonder if she doesn't "act" like a "dark" wife would.
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  • From ChaosLady on May 12, 2012
    Chapter 11 is not a new chapter.
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  • From ANON - Chester on May 12, 2012
    I really like this story! I am curious what Ron did to Hermione and why do I have a feeling that Ginny did it to Harry? I really like where this is going and would love to keep reading more. Keep up the great story line!
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  • From ANON - Krystal on May 12, 2012
    Next chapter please
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  • From chris7100 on May 12, 2012
    Review for chap. 2 - Ron's not acting weird, he's acting evil. And it's painfully obvious that both Harry and Hermione have been potioned, or mentally compromised in some other way, by the weasleys. I do hope you werent thinking that was subtle, because it was painfully obvious from about 1/3 into chapter 1. That said, it doesn't make the story bad or unappealing in any way. What's frustrating is the annoying AN that is rather insulting to your readers' collective intelligence. Have confidence in your writing *and* in your readers and resist the temptation of unnecessary explanatory or reassuring ANs. Off to read chapter 3.
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  • From ANON - hotflower901 on May 12, 2012
    Maybe Harry wont have to break with everyone in the family. But there will be hell to pay for his kids when they go to Hogwarts. Harry might need to get them homeschooled.
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  • From bloodshound on May 12, 2012
    hars doing well at keeping up appearances. still, i'm looking forward to when it all hits the fan.
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