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Reviews for Things Fall Apart, But Then You Build Again

By : zeldaofarel
  • From ANON - elementalwitch on June 09, 2011
    Most excellent.. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From dominique1 on June 05, 2011
    so everyone had a hand an taking harry money and everything else
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  • From dominique1 on June 05, 2011
    this is really good want more
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  • From dominique1 on June 05, 2011
    its not right how the weasley wore handed harrys sets
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  • From dominique1 on June 05, 2011
    i so want herimone and the kids and harry to take everything from the weasleys
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  • From dominique1 on June 05, 2011
    what to say im locking forward to see harry getting his system clean out
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  • From bloodshound on June 05, 2011
    good grief, playing the part of a good biased little light wizard must be such a strain. I know i'd be gagging regularly and often.
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  • From ANON - petalsoft on May 07, 2011
    Wow! Great story. I love this whole dark/light wizard background story. Nicely done. Please update soon:)
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  • From bloodshound on May 01, 2011
    urrrg. How can Harry bare it. I hope when Harry gets in he can do something about the controlling juice. The attitudes of the so called light are horrible.
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  • From alientheet on April 30, 2011
    Hey really enjoying your story. I like your original take on the wizarding world & culture
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  • From bloodshound on April 26, 2011
    the really give Harry no credit at all. Very complacent of them, especially without the juice of control.
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  • From betelgeuse on April 26, 2011
    Given the differences between Light and Dark wizard about family, marriage and women's rights it's clear why the Light side is so muggle-lover: muggleborn and halfblood women know nothing about the wizarding world tradition and like Hermione end up married with domineering, bigoted, chauvinist bullies, and wizardborn witches marry wizard used to think about women as equal so they are free to do all they want, pretty much like Ginny (I'd like to see how much she'd liked if Harry'd start to behave like Ron, demanding her to be always at home doing only what he wants... no more wasting money, no more 2 months holiday without her husband and children spent with who knows who, doing who knows what).
    Hope to read a new chapter soon, perhaps with some clues about the food. Does the Light side use a potion to make the muggleborn wives and husbands pliant and accomodating?
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  • From MightyGryffindor on April 08, 2011
    The description you gave of dark and light wizards makes me think of the Democrats and Republicans in the US. The Democrats being the dark, or more liberal people, and the Republicans the holier-than-though's, who want to see women barefoot and pregnant, while staying at home to cook and clean. I would love to see you give this as an example in the story.
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  • From layne378 on April 08, 2011
    OMG... I love this story!!! I can not wait for the next chapters to be posted. This story has me enthralled. Please update soon. :-)
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  • From newtothis on April 05, 2011
    i start this story becouse i thought it would be good, seeing ron and hermoien happy in marrige, and harry tring to figure out how to tell his wife he know longer love her, and harry being afraid he would lose his best friend. but know you made ron monster that tries to control his wife,


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