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Reviews for Things Fall Apart, But Then You Build Again

By : zeldaofarel
  • From puffpear23 on April 03, 2011
    I'm reviewing in hope of helping to inspire you into writing a new chapter :)
    I found your story today and i'm happy i did as it was simply WONDERFUL!!
    I literaly laughed out loud at one of your end notes on how the story would move slow because he could not simply wake up and think "Hey i'm gay!" So thank you for giving me a good laugh!
    I love the idea of Dark and Light wizards and i love how creative you are and the approach you're taking on this story.
    I just hope eventually Draco isn't such an (Excuse the language) ass!! Haha.
    So i can't wait for you to continue and i will try to be patient but, i'm bad at it so bare with me.

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  • From SilentDreamer on April 01, 2011
    Loving the story, but really want things to move along!! Hehehehe... ;)
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  • From bloodshound on March 17, 2011
    wow, messed up much... I'm thinking Ron needs to go on a diet too.
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  • From kogaluver on March 10, 2011
    Okay. I remember reading this story a long time ago. Herm and Harry and even Harry's kids are being manipulated with the juice that they're drinking. Only when Herm changed her diet, cutting out sugar, which included the juice, did her mind start to clear. I seem to remember this story being further along then what's posted. Is this a rewrite? I checked that the first chapter was written back in September, but then how did I know about the juice when you've only just posted chapter two?
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2011
    Well... Isn't Ronald the biggest cuddily teddy bear you ever did see?

    I found the conversation between Harry and Hermione about Malfoy out of place. That would be the last thing they would discuss.

    Looking forward to more, however!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2011
    Candida? I am tempted to say "you simply cannot be serious" but I have a feeling you are not... Entirely.
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  • From dominique1 on March 02, 2011
    want more
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  • From dominique1 on December 12, 2010
    i just found this story and i must say i want more i hope that harry and hermione gets their kids i also hope that harry gets his money and that they weasley get lock up want more soon please its really good
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  • From AngelPoppet on November 12, 2010
    Oooo, this is a good start. Bloody connivin' Weasleys eh? You should def continue with this.
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  • From ANON - enigma on September 12, 2010
    I can't wait to read more.
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