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Reviews for Night Patrol

By : CryingCinderella
  • From ANON - Lydia Ravenswood on November 23, 2010
    more more more!!! i am LOVING your story! you're actually writing in a way that sounds like snape, unlike many others! can't wait t read another chapter, and i hope it's soon!
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  • From ANON - VicariousEyes on November 15, 2010
    Please tell me you're planning to update this...
    I will beg. (; >_>)
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  • From Christmas08 on November 14, 2010
    I wanted to share my admiration of your piece. :D I enjoyed this so much I had to share this with all my friends and since the words I told them are precisely what I wanted to confess to you, I will simply copy my post here: "I am currently reading an amazing Snape/Hermione fanfic that is incredible so far! If I deem these chapters acceptable by my standards, which are high, I will gladly share my review and the title when I've completed my reading. Presently, I'm making my way through chapter 3 and have only 8 remaining chapters. Talk to you all in a bit!...." Two hours later, I continue. "I didn't expect me to take so long to finish this story, but I highly recommend 'Night Patrol'. You can find this story on adultfanfiction.net in the Harry Potter Het-Snape/Hermione section. Absolutely spectacular! This author can truly write. Her description and intense detail has the reader fully involved with the characters and I found myself mentally scoring points for Severus and/or Hermione. This mental and eventual, but quick to arrive, physical battle between the two is phenomenal. Firstly, I found very few grammatical errors, some of which may have been intentional based or depending on the author's cultural or social upbringing. Their speech in my opinion was completely accurate to the characters and their actions and reactions were appropriate. His/her style of writing was captivating and enthralling and their vocabulary was delicious and vast. Their imagery will have your mind confusing words for motion picture. I have read too many fanfictions in the eight years I have been a devoted reader of Harry Potter creations of all degrees and it is not often I recommend and review elaborately to people who may or may not like this genre. However, this is one of them I will share. Please, if you are not offended by explicit content, read and enjoy this fanfiction. :)"

    Superb job!
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  • From ANON - dita on November 09, 2010
    listen. you need to update asap. Otherwise I will come and make you.
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  • From ANON - oliviajoules on November 04, 2010
    I don't believe it, but I think you just melted my brain, CC. Good gravy...this has got to be the most stimulating fic I've read in like...forever! You MUST archive at TPP or Ashwinder more fans deserve to read this!
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  • From LadyEvansPotter on October 31, 2010
    Brilliant story, I love it!
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  • From StillHorny on October 28, 2010
    CC, you are too cruel. You can't leave us hanging like this!!!

    The chapter was hot and was getting much hotter. I can't stand not knowing what happens next!?!?!?!?!?!

    You are a minx, leaving a cliff hanger like this. But that is one of the reasons I LOVE YOU!
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  • From AshleyLara on October 26, 2010
    great chapter, cant wait for the next one!
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  • From sevsheart on October 25, 2010
    I hope one of them breaks the rules soon!!!
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  • From StillHorny on October 23, 2010
    Oh, I loved the spanking!!!! Then hot sex in the shower; just too much.

    But she should have been punished for the hickey. I am sure Severus could have come up with something kinky!?!?!?! Maybe he still will.

    More, please!
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  • From Laurelei on October 23, 2010
    How delicious. The spanking was particularly yummy. Well done!
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  • From flamingmoth on October 23, 2010
    I've been reading this since you started posting it, and I must say, I'm impressed. It seems very realistic and in-character, and the sex scenes are hot and well-written. I look forward to reading the rest! :D
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  • From ANON - Nightqueen on October 23, 2010
    Love it! This story is terrific! I have a feeling they are coming to care for one another! I can't wait to see what you write next.
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  • From ANON - quantumOwl on October 19, 2010
    I'm just too lazy to log in. ;)

    Mmmmmmmf, another fantastic chapter! :D and be you Australian with your use of 'doona'? :)

    I love this story, although perhaps you should warn us to not read it on the train. ;)

    Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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  • From AshleyLara on October 19, 2010
    great update. i hope you plan on continuing it. can't wait!
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