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Reviews for Night Patrol

By : CryingCinderella
  • From ANON - HMSfoundinabottle on September 18, 2010
    Ohmygod! I can't believe you just left it there! I'm gagging for more! Update soon please. (:
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  • From ANON - Danielle on September 18, 2010
    Now how can you just stop that chapter like that?!?! I want to read some more! I love it so far :)
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  • From AshleyLara on September 16, 2010
    please update soon!!!!! good job so far.
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  • From ANON - Claire on September 16, 2010
    How very mean of you to stop right at this point...
    At first I thought that this chapter appears to be a bit boring, since it first didn't show much difference to the last one.
    But then, (Surprise!) your story takes quite an interesting development and I'm looking forward to continue reading.
    Please don't let us wait too long.

    Claire

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  • From ANON - Danielle on September 15, 2010
    Nice work! I hope she caught him in the act...he needs to feel some embarrassment! Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Danielle on September 14, 2010
    ooooh! I love it :) I hope you write more soon!
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  • From macropixi on September 14, 2010
    This was so freaking hot! I want to see more of this story! Please continue. I beg of you!!!
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  • From ANON - Erik's Rose on September 14, 2010
    Loving this, are you going to update soon? If you do I promise to review
    Kindest Regards
    ER
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  • From ANON - sevsheart on September 13, 2010
    Can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully Severus will give in
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  • From use2b2t2 on September 13, 2010
    All I can say is wow. You might want to up your rating to Adult++ though. I did not realy care for what he demanded of her but if the rating was upped I could have expected it as it was very demeaning. Interesting story and cannot wait to see what is next.

    Mare
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  • From nck12nicholspd on September 12, 2010
    Nicely done! I can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon! It's been a while since I've actually found a story about Snape and Hermione that I instantly like.
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on September 12, 2010
    Interesting concept. Though I have to say that Snape seemed to overreact, but this could be from his own sexual arousal at seeing her like she was. Her detentions should prove an entertaining read I'm sure. Thanks for the story and please update soon.
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  • From ANON - zucca on September 11, 2010
    Loved it. Please continue
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