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Reviews for Blood, Sex, Love, Magic

By : neelix
  • From Remarkable on September 21, 2010
    Hi Neelix I'm sorry I didn't realize this had been written for an exchange. I understand completely, I have a few going myself so of course you can't really add to it after the fact (unless you are so inclined.)

    Loved that chapter! So sweet and to the point. I love the light that just shines inside of Hermione in this chapter and the poignant need of Severus as they come together as husband and wife. It was very romantic!!
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  • From KellyJCR on September 21, 2010
    I had no idea this was out until today. I went straight through and read all 11 chapters in one go. Need less to say I was very pleased. Its a lovely story that takes on a more lustful tone due to the circumstances. I love the in control yet pushed so far into the depths of his own dsire he might go mad Severus. It gives him a new demention other than the super spy we all know and love. I wish I would have seen it sooner and I also wish it would be a bit longer but I live with deadlines and understand that they must be met at all costs. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!
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  • From missanimegrl on September 21, 2010
    Wonderful work as always, neelix, I'm quite intrigued! A good solution to the whole 'Lily' thing and the snake attack. However, I must ask, how did Dumbledore survive?! He was Avada-ed! He fell from the Astronomy Tower!! What saved him? Or was there an alternative? How did Fred survive, too? Does this mean Tonks and Remus are alive, as well?
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  • From Remarkable on September 20, 2010
    Ugh! Now I have to wait for another chapter. Hmmmm now I know how everyone else feels when they wait for my updates LOL. I love this story. Can you stretch it out beyond 14 chapters?? Pleeassseee? It just seems too short with them getting married, having kids and turning her with only that many chappies. Maybe a continuation? I love this story! More!
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  • From voraciousreader on September 20, 2010
    Albus always did irritate me, long before I found fan fiction. For such a ruthless git, he never once took a more efficient way of ending the war and I always found his treatment of Snape rather dark. Your stories are always character-driven and interesting. More when yu are ready, please!
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  • From winter748 on September 20, 2010
    Oh, no, I apologize for just now leaving a review. Your stories are always so wonderful I just couldn't stop myself. Great characterization of Severus, Hermione and especially Dumbledore. Showing him as caring but controlling and manipulative at the same time. I especially like the exploration of what "vampires" may be like in the HP world. Consider this review hit by a multiplying spell.
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  • From bloodyblond on September 19, 2010
    Despite the fact that your title reminded me of that ridiculous Ciara song, which I absolutely hate (and now can't stop singing), I am definetely liking this story, but really at this point, I should expect no less considering all your stories are absolutely awesome.
    Normally I tend to shy away from stories with Blood in the title, since more often then not they are angsty as hell with Blood being a not so subtle way of saying that there's gonna be some deaths in the story. I clicked on it anyways (cause I can't not read your stories) and was very pleasantly suprised. It's funny because I was lamenting last week that more stories didn't have this particular 'version' of Severus, a version I happen to be a super huge fan of. He's sexy all on his own, but throw that factor in and you get double the sexy.
    I can't wait to see what is in that letter, and am eagerly anticipating (what I consider) to be your amazingly legendary sex scenes. (Really, no one writes them quite as good as you!) And I can just imagine this one will have some extra.. bite *snicker* to it!
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  • From frizzle2007 on September 19, 2010
    Love the story!!! more soon please :-)
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  • From MonoSpica on September 19, 2010
    Whow, great story so far! I'm looking forward to the next update.
    I really like your stories, because you always find a way to come up with an original storyline, despite all the stories that already have been written about this pairing.

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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on September 19, 2010
    Hi! I know I should have reviewed before now, but I was waiting for there to be more meat on the bones as it were. I am totally enjoying the story so far. I can't wait for you to come out with more chapters, especially since you left us with a cliffhanger in the last chapter. That was mean, by the way. Leaving us poor readers wondering what was going on with that letter to Hermione! I loved it. LOL! Excellent work and please do try to update again soon.
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  • From dracoschick007 on September 19, 2010
    OK, now that I have read the firs nine chapters, I have to day that I really love this!!! I can't wait to read more so update again soon, please!!!
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  • From chloelyn on September 19, 2010
    Interesting~ Don't stop now!! UPDATES XD
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  • From voraciousreader on September 19, 2010
    More and more interesting, I must say. Poor Nikolai, I liked him. How much trouble is his 'subletting' going to give them? More, please!
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  • From eileenmilner on September 18, 2010
    Very, very amazing writing. Even though I have plotted my own stories, Iill love the addition of Hermione stating she saw fairies in her garden when she was six. Love the plot and therefore the story.

    More please, very quickly,

    Best wishes, Donavon
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  • From voraciousreader on September 17, 2010
    Well, this looks fascinating. Nikolai is an intriguing character, and I like the changed dynamic beween Snape and Dumbledore. I assume we will hear more about the reasons for sev's death issues?
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