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Reviews for The Fantasy Book

By : CryingCinderella
  • From missanimegrl on October 22, 2010
    YAAAY! Library sex! Lol ^.^ Anyway, lovely chapter... But now its quite clear. The man's faking it now!!! He just wants to hear how much she wants him! XD I bet he's hoping she'll write a fantasy where he wakes up and wants to shag her right there... And then freak her out when it becomes reality, lols. But that's my own twisted thoughts. ^.^ Yours are so awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From voraciousreader on October 22, 2010
    Sneaky Slytherin, I think he's just having too good a time to wake up!
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  • From ANON - Pianita on October 22, 2010
    The library story was great! still fanning my face too much heat. Perhaps Severus responds better to descriptions of him been in the receiving end? Or when he is not in control? don't they say that those who have a controlling personality secretely desire to be controlled. Maybe i mentioned this before. One of my favorite type of Severus is the shy or virging Severus, and we don't get to read many of those stories....Maybe a voodoo doll of Severus?
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  • From ANON - Addicting Writer on October 22, 2010
    I like how this is going so far. Loved the dream bit :D. I got some ideas for you.
    1) A sweet and gentle idea about Hermione and Severus on their wedding night. Instead of rough sex, it will be gentle and sweet.
    2) Maybe a threesome fantasy that has Hermione, Severus, and Lucius (or Draco, or someone that off sets Severus. I mean, like yin and yang sort of stuff)

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  • From ANON - Daygonna on October 22, 2010
    Another great chapter! The beginning of this one had me thinking of an idea you could mull over for a future chapter.

    When Hermione falls asleep next to him, perhaps one of her fantasies of him is "remixed" in her dream world via him using legilimency, sort of how he wanted that particular fantasy she had read to him to play out

    Hope this strikes your muse - but either way I cant wait for the next installment
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  • From StillHorny on October 22, 2010
    CC, I thought it was HOT. I can see why it is one of Hermoine's favorites!!

    I sooo hope that Severus is 'obsorbing' all of these fantasies.

    Please continue; I love this storyline.
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  • From StillHorny on October 19, 2010
    CC; a wet dream in his coma?!?!?!?!? Oh you are priceless. I do wonder what ever happened to his bathing trucks? Did they wash up on the beach...maybe by the fire?

    As to a fantasy request. You know mine by now. A Master/slave (Severus/Hermoine) fantasy with him 'commanding' (making) her do things that she would not normally do.

    But you have already given into one of my requests...the body parts reacting to her fantasies. **Bravo, bravo, bravo!**


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  • From missanimegrl on October 19, 2010
    That was indeed a close call! I think Hermoine needs to start wearing clothes when she sleeps and reads to him (or at least a better robe), or that Severus should, I dunno... Wake up!! Still, another fantasy won't hurt! I do hope he wakes up soon!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on October 19, 2010
    Deliciously decadent. Loved it! Thank you. The only thing that comes to mind for me fantasy-wise is one where they've been married a couple of years, both are teachers, and work has gotten in the way of their time together. He surprises her with a romantic/loving (for Severus) night that she won't soon forget. ;-)

    Thanks again for keeping up with this story! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Danielle on October 19, 2010
    I loved this Ocean fantasy! It's my favorite one yet. My favorites are when Snape is domineering, but not mean. I love a dominant man! And I love your story :)
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  • From ANON - kathyjo on October 13, 2010
    Wow I am so enjoying this story...hoping for an update soon!
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  • From ANON - Mary on October 12, 2010
    Awesome update... a little on the dark side but hot nontheless. Now, what a dilema... to "help" Severus by giving hima a HAND or just to read. Choices, choices, choices...
    On to the next story darling!
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  • From ANON - Pianita on October 11, 2010
    Oh my! that was steamy. I am not one to see Severus hurt, but it was the story that got the must reaction from the man in comma! i have to say that submisive Severus is one of my favorite themes; dont they say that a strong controlling person wants to be controled deep down? Perhaps this Severus is one to be seduced by Hermione?
    Great story!
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  • From ANON - Kimi on October 11, 2010
    Darn it! What a place to end it. One more good story, a bit of touching, and Snape might just pop up from a coma. At least that's what I'm hoping
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  • From mvsanche on October 11, 2010
    Interesting concept, definitely not one I've heard before. I love the way Severus is starting to awaken; can't wait to see what happen when he does!Please write more soon, I can't wait for the next installment.
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