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Reviews for The Fantasy Book

By : CryingCinderella
  • From StillHorny on September 22, 2010
    Oh, Cinderella this to soo HOT! The possiblilites for more graphic fantasies are endless.

    I am hoping that one of Hermoine's fantasies is a true SUBMITION fantasy. While Severus always seems to "take her", it would be interesting to have her admit to a fantasy where she is the slave/submissive and he the Master; making her do things that she would be afraid to admit to. I think that Severus should have a physical reaction to her fantasies; while still in the coma.

    But that is just MY Fantasy ;) !!!

    Please continue...SOON!!
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  • From ShilohDarke on September 22, 2010
    O.M.G! This was hot! I hope you will be adding more soon! I loved it!
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  • From ANON - sandlapper on September 22, 2010
    OK...Time for a cold shower...now where the hell is that stirring rod?
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  • From ANON - anonanon on September 22, 2010
    Damn, that was one sexy time fantasy. Thank you for updating, please do so again when you have the inspiration and the chance.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on September 21, 2010
    Loved it! Now, I'm seeing her have to complete a late night assignment by Sinastra on the Astronomy tower and being interrupted. ;-) Thank you again! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Sevsheart on September 21, 2010
    Great Story, If that doesn't wake him up I don't know what will. HOpe for an update soon and for your other stories as well.
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  • From ANON - Jo on September 21, 2010
    I'm really loving this story! Keep up the good work :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2010
    Wow. That is all I have to say. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - anonanon on September 20, 2010
    Very interesting, you have quite the unique scenario here. Please update once more when you feel inspired to do so, you've done a great job so far.
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  • From ANON - Porge on September 20, 2010
    Its so good that this is the first review Ive ever written because I thought you should know. Please keep them coming!
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  • From ANON - sandlapper on September 20, 2010
    I do believe that when the hubby gets home we are going to do that...tango, I mean, um yes, tango! Woohoo, I can't wait to see the next one.
    I think I would want Severus to teach me how to stir a potion correctly. Update soon!
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  • From Tri on September 20, 2010
    Wow, unbelievable. Just three chapters in and I think this becoming one of my favorite Snape/Hermione stories. I like how unique and interesting it is. Keep up the good work!
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  • From winter748 on September 20, 2010
    Excuse me while a get a glass of cold water ....Phew, that's better. Ok, Dancing With the Stars starts a new season soon and this chapter will definitely add a new dimension. Maybe a second glass of water will help. Oh bugger, I'll just take a cold shower and be done with it.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on September 20, 2010
    That was delicious! I loved his passionate way of teaching her to dance. ;-) And, I really like the fantasy ideas you've come up with so far. I hope you have one where she fantasizes herself on their wedding night to put that idea in his head, too. lol I don't want the story to end too son, but I really look forward to his reaction when he does wake up and realize all of those fantasies could be made real. Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - winters on September 20, 2010
    Very well written. Your writing is getting better and better. Hermione's fantasy flight was very hot with great visual description. Can't wait for the next one.
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