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Reviews for The Fantasy Book

By : CryingCinderella
  • From LCGrabski on September 10, 2011
    I can't help but fan-girl for a moment and be all, "EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS IS PERFECT!!!" I love all of your stories and your voice, the voice you give your characters and every topic you choose to cover. I wish every author here gave as much attention and care into their stories as you obviously do.
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  • From ANON - Nightqueen on September 10, 2011
    Ohhhh! I missed this story! I'm so glad it's back! I would love to have a bath like the one Severus provided for Hermione in this chapter! Beautiful and Sensual
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on September 10, 2011
    I would like to thank your friend for prompting you, because I truly enjoy this story. You did surprise me, as that was sensual, lovely and loving, though they are far from in love. I like seeing his fantasies and I hope there are more to come. Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From ElegantMess on September 10, 2011
    Yeah!!! I love this story! I was so happy to see that you had updated it!!!
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  • From ANON - colao on September 09, 2011
    I'm glad you're revisiting the story for I do enjoy it
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  • From ANON - jesse on August 24, 2011
    I actually freakin loved this! It was amazing and I hope you decide to add more chapters in future.
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  • From ANON - GypsyMistress on June 16, 2011
    I just started reading this and find myself entranced. But updating would be beyond pleasure. Surely, you do not intend to not finish a story after such a delightfully teasing and arousing, and successful beginning?
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  • From ANON - Paula on April 27, 2011
    I normally don't read WiPs because they leave me frustrated and your fiction is probably the best example of that :) It's one of the hottest I have ever read and I have lost count of how many times I have re-read what you've already posted. I cannot wait for more!
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  • From FemmeBono on April 05, 2011
    Oh I like it so much better now that he's awake! :)
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  • From ANON - pixiekiz on February 22, 2011
    more! please god more! this has got to be the sexiest, hottest most nerve tinglingly brilliant severus/hermione fan fiction ive EVER read!!!
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  • From EveAlli on January 30, 2011
    Sooooo good! You're quickly becoming one of my favorites! I'm going down your list of stories and I'm loving them all! :D

    ~E.A.~
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  • From deatheaterqueenie on January 29, 2011
    Oh this story is most enjoyable! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - anna on January 24, 2011
    OMG i love love love this story!! soooo HOT! i can't wait for more~ This is such a well written story and i like that it doesn't make severus out to be some lovey dovey goofball once he has bedded hermione. More please!!
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  • From ANON - Verbose or Concise on January 20, 2011
    I wanted to send you a message about this, but I did not have access to that feature, so here goes in comments.
    You have asked for input about your story and as you were doing so well I never felt the need to comment other than to say "Good Job". But as you have stated having trouble driving the story at this sensitive area, I thought I would contribute.

    While you are correct that they can't go on having sex for the rest of the chapters without the story becoming wildly unrealistic, it is still necessary for them to have emotionally driven interaction at this early stage in their relationship. I think a good place to go next ( now that we know Snape was fully aware during his coma) would be to expose some of his feelings for her outside of sex. Certainly, he has sexual attraction to her, and has indulged in sexual fantasies involving her while comatose and also awake, but Hermione expressed many other feelings and indeed a deeper tenderness beyond sexual attraction while caring for him. This deeper emotional connection may indeed drive him to want to care for and protect her as she did him. Perhaps the trip to the shower involves a more caring, even cleansing, and tender activity than previous scenes have shown. (also given his weakened state, I doubt his body would cooperate with anything more vigorous)
    Summarily, now that he has made his point that sex requires two bodies as well as two minds, albeit vastly different from one another, and the act cannot be fully experienced without the desired partner sharing your passion, that it does not necessarily mean their hearts are so very far from the same place. After all, while he heard all of her fantasies, he also heard her confess a deep fear of losing him and the joy of simply be in his presence.


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  • From truehazel on January 19, 2011
    Oh, my! I do believe I'm going to be waiting anxiously for the next cha[ter, that's for certain. I worried at first, when it seemed Snape was disgusted by her. I mean, it's not that one could expect him to be happy about being fondled in his sleep without some mixed emotions. I just didn't expect someone like Hermione to have actually gone through with chosing a favor. But it shows her as more human. And I actually like the real Snape as opposed to fantasy Snape, with his warm hands and succulant mouth. My favorite quote is when he says he shags just like any other man. It reminds me of a book I once read about a man who was idolized by a woman. She was trady to commit adultery with this man. She had an entire life planned in her head. And she didn't hardly know him at all.
    I think I can't wait to see Hermione get to know the real Snape. The one who, like every man, can be annoying or slightly sweet, or absolutely asinine. Can't wait!

    Sincerely.
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