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Reviews for Defining Sexuality

By : use2b2t2
  • From deatheaterqueenie on January 06, 2011
    awwww I loved this story. I do look forward to more of your stories and I'm sorry that the story didn't end the way you originally planned. either way it was a wonderful story!
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  • From deatheaterqueenie on December 21, 2010
    *dances around in GLEE* I can't wait for the final chapter. Even though my heart will be sad to see this epic story end, I am stoked to read the next chapter. chapter 13 was a tad confusing, but it still was good.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on December 17, 2010
    After all of that, he's dead?! Please tell me that was just a horrible dream...
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  • From deatheaterqueenie on December 16, 2010
    IS THAT IT?!!!!!!!!! THAT CAN'T BE IT!!!!!! PLS DON'T LET THAT BE IT!!!!
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  • From deatheaterqueenie on December 13, 2010
    Please please tell me that is not the end!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on December 10, 2010
    Yay! That was very nicely done. And, I loved the words on the cauldron. Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From voraciousreader on December 08, 2010
    The engraving on the cauldron is a lovely touch. Just a slight note: you have her avoiding the use of "Slytherin bribery" when what she was doing was showing him potential "blackmail' or 'Extortion' materiel. Both are Slytherinesque, but one is the carrot and the other a stick, so to speak.
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  • From jaimelee on November 29, 2010
    Awesome chapter! Please update asap!! I really want to see them get together, and for the true Hermione to return!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2010
    you are killing me here..my heart is racing just thinking about it..your a very good writer..please post more soon.
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  • From voraciousreader on November 29, 2010
    Ah, I love it when Hermione gets her determination up. loved Ch. 10.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2010
    love it!!!!!
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  • From mvsanche on November 23, 2010
    Please update again today!! I can't wait to see how he reacts to this news.
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  • From voraciousreader on November 18, 2010
    Y' know, in some ways this reminds me of Dante's 'Inferno': Hermione has entered a world where a specific condition is required and has acquired a guide to take her through her observations of these varying levels of both pleasure and pain. Lucky wench.
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  • From severus49 on November 12, 2010
    I really like this story! I think that the writing might be a little hard for some people to read. Some suggestions I have, as I've done some Beta work is that you could always go back and reread your chapters before you upload them, to see where you need to put more commas in. You have a lot of thoughts that are run together, and commas help you separate them. Commas also help where a character's inner thoughts start and end. You can also use them where a character would take a breath when they are speaking. Also, a character's hidden thoughts read better when they are separated by single apostrophes on either side, and put in italics. I hope these suggestions help you and make it easier for others to read your amazing work.

    I agree with the previous reviewer that Hermione's professor is a real prick. It sounds like he was using that class for his personal dating service, and since she was a virgin, he didn't want anything to do with her.

    I have to wonder about the club and most of her acquaintances too. Ginny (supposedly her best friend) is working there, and Hermione didn't know? And why didn't they all want Hermione there to begin with? If she's such a prude, why didn't they try to initiate her sooner into that type of lifestyle? Better yet, how can they even say they're her friends? What is left to have in common? She didn't want in the Wizarding world anymore, she didn't want to have loose morals like it seems all her friends - including Severus have...it's like the Roman Empire! Like, when's Caligula coming out?

    I'm going to keep reading, because I'm on Hermione's side so far. I don't think you have to be a slut (male or female) to understand your sexuality, or be naughty and open to new sexual experiences in private.
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  • From MIverson on November 07, 2010
    Wow, this is a great story. I do hope you finish it soon as I was really enjoying it.
    LOL

    Cosmyk
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