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Reviews for With Your Green Mantle

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From moodysavage on April 29, 2012
    *snicker* Draco was so... self-centered?... no... self-serving?... no...selfishly magnanimous? lol I don't know exactly how to put it but he was really fun to read. I kept laughing at what an oblivious self-satisfied helpful Draco looks like... very entertaining :)
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  • From ANON - Rousy_P on December 04, 2010
    Beautiful work, as always :) I love the way you played with the legends, and your Draco is incredible! By the way (fly-swatter time): "The only women I had sex with were Pansy, Draco, and Astoria," --> Shouldn't that be 'Pansy, Daphne, and Astoria'?
    Thanks again for sharing your fics!
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  • From sonykit on November 13, 2010
    this was absolutely beautiful. you described scenes so vividly that i can see brilliantly drawn pictures in my head.
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  • From keebz on November 11, 2010
    I love your stories, they're absolutely brilliant! But I know I'd want someone to tell me if I typed something wrong, so I just thought I'd point out that you said:


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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on November 07, 2010
    Ahh I loved this story! Very compelling. I liked the anti-hero Draco was and how he refused to be anything different. Well done!!
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  • From ANON - Regina on September 25, 2010
    Say, were you at all influenced by Ellen Kushner's Thomas the Rhymer? Because let me tell you, reading that book really helped me follow along with the myth in this story. Also Ellen Kushner is awesome.
    Also, Draco's all-too-human flaws are amusing, especially knowing that he changed- and will change- but will remain, essentially, a vain brat. I enjoyed your descriptions of Harry's clothes as well, and would a short sequel be amiss?
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  • From ANON - medusasmirror on September 25, 2010
    Tam Lin is one of my favorite stories! This was fantastic. Thank you!
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  • From Elphaba on September 24, 2010
    Wow that was an amazing story and Long it took me forever! LOL
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  • From BleedingHearts on September 23, 2010
    Fantastic fic. I love all the details and the poetic writing style, and how amazing the sex scenes were without it just being pure smut.
    This is a really unique fic, and making Draco lust-driven instead of fluffy and romantic makes it even more interesting to read.
    Well done, I cant wait to read more of your work. XXX
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  • From AoiNikko on September 23, 2010
    Hiya! I've followed you for a good year, I think, maybe a little less, I'm not sure. I can't remember why I started reading as HP fanfiction really isn't my thing, but I remember that I kept reading because your writing was a serious breath of fresh air as my own fandom had gone down the tubes. It was well written and paced beautifully, and of course I LOVED how quickly you updated, as well as the little one shots you would put out after you would finish a multi-chapter fic. I don't usually find any mistakes, but there was a sentence;
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  • From ANON - W on September 23, 2010
    ... ... ... *speachless*

    ... I don't know what to say. That was just so great!
    I like the way that you describe things. They are always intense and you use language in ways I've never seen before! Most people are confined in the vocabulary and grammatic rules of a language. But with you its just like you take them and shape them and make them obey you! And because I especially like the english language, you have my undying adoration for it^^
    No, really, the way that you described the mantle was just beautiful. And the fairies... although you described them really thoroughly, all I have of them is a wavering image that changes every time I try to see it clearer. And that really fits the story, so: Well done!

    I so liked you humour in this story^^ It often had me laughing out loud! Draco was often so shallow (especially about the "lines") that it bordered on comical. I could go on and on all day about which funny situations I liked most, but let's put it together in one sentence:

    THIS STORY WAS JUST BLOODY AWESOME!
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  • From ANON - I_Will_Change_the_World on September 23, 2010
    Wonderful, interesting, brilliant ending. Loved it!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on September 22, 2010
    Now that was interesting.
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  • From ANON - tamikolee on September 22, 2010
    One word 'Brilliant' :)
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