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Reviews for Black Seduction

By : Tinkerbelletje
  • From ANON - jo on March 02, 2013
    More please. :)
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  • From onecelestialbeing on July 21, 2012
    This is so good!
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  • From slygriff21 on June 01, 2012
    Looking foreward to more.
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  • From SSHGSHIPER on March 23, 2012
    awww cant wait to read more
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  • From demonsangel on March 23, 2012
    I am liking this story a lot so far. There are a few things I would like to point out. I understand you are looking for a beta but I figured there were some simple things I could help you with right now.

    You keep saying "ow" when you mean "ah" or "oh." Ow is like "ow, that hurt."
    Also, you keep putting "hearth" when you mean "heart."

    Now, normally I do not offer to beta. But I like this story, so if you are still in need of one, you can message me in the forums, my name is Astraea and we will discuss it.
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  • From Madamdragon on March 23, 2012
    Good update. I am also curious as to what the surprise might be. Since they are mated I thought for a second that there might be a ring, but who knows. I hope you will update again soon please.
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  • From Madamdragon on March 22, 2012
    Aw that is sooo sweet. I can't wait for another update.
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on March 21, 2012
    i think i missed something...it is Snape thats the fox...right? i thought itd be hott to have Lupin but i like him better anyway....but did i miss something or wasn't it put in there????!!!!!!
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  • From Madamdragon on March 21, 2012
    I knew it would be Sev. Even though it's not mentioned. Loving this. Hope more is to come soon please.
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  • From slygriff21 on July 11, 2011
    I've read this story here before but under another author's name. Are you the same one and just reposting it because you changed your name?
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  • From phoenixbride on October 30, 2010
    I really love your writing, and I like this story a lot. I have never beta'd before, but I have descent spelling and grammar skills. You can email me at phoenix_bride@yahoo.com if you are interested in giving me a shot. I am online daily and usually have a couple hours each night that I can use editing. Keep up the great writing!

    Phoenix Bride
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  • From StillHorny on October 14, 2010
    Now you are just trying to drive me crazy!?!?!?!

    We know the 'mystery' man is not Snape. But WHO is it? Could it be Draco? I know it is not Ron, he is not romantic enough.

    Hermoine already has feelings for Severus and he for her. But will the mystery man be too much of a pull on her heart. And what will happen to Snape, if she choses someone else? Will he spiral into darkness again? Would she allow that to happen?

    So many questions!!
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  • From StillHorny on October 06, 2010
    First...Thank you for Posting!!! I love your stories.

    I thought Snape was the Mystery Man too?!?!?!?! Now, will there be another suduction in Hermoine's future?? Who will she choose? Will she have to make a choice?

    Also, I loved that Hermoine was able to tease Severus about Albus telling him to keep his suduction down. That was too funny!
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  • From LadyRayvenn on October 06, 2010
    Hello! I just wanted to say your story is awesome! If you are still looking for a beta, I volunteer! I'm not an official one, but my English teacher in high school used to have me edit essays because I did it better, no joke. If you don't want me to edit though, it's okay. Keep up the awesome writing regardless!

    -Rayvenn T.
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  • From StillHorny on October 05, 2010
    Tinkerbell...you are such a TEASE!!!!

    They are both SO close. The question is, who will get who first?

    Please post soon!
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