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Reviews for The Eraser

By : torachick91
  • From Azraelsson on August 11, 2017

    The really tiny print font is annoying as hell and it strains my eyes to read please make the typing actually big enough to see the story is good thanks


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  • From PhoenixDaisy on December 14, 2016

    I have two little nitpicks about the first chapter. One is that "panther" is a rather generic term, in that it can refer to either species of the Panthera genus (usually the melanistic [black] varients thereof) leopards and jaguars, or it can refer to cougars (also commonly called mountain lions). If they're black big cats and aren't sure of their exact species, it'd be cool if they do turn out to be leopards (espeically if they're canon HP characters). 

    The second nitpick is the fact that you have red and blue tigers in his group. All turned tigers are orange. If they're reds and a blue, they would have to be born tigers. Now, if I'm not mistaken the only other red tiger to have shown up originally came from a blue colony because the rest of his clan was killed off, so it wouldn't be impossible if these were part of an isolated tiger colony in the UK, likely mostly reds, and just don't know of another tiger colony to go to for help.


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  • From Mashkai30 on June 19, 2013
    Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From Mashkai30 on August 25, 2012
    Interesting!
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  • From ANON - Linds on June 25, 2012
    Awesome story!

    Would love to see an update of this!!!!
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  • From ANON - loretta537 on June 23, 2012
    i really love this story, i cant wait to see what happens at the zoo or later at night during the full moon
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  • From AmberEyedWolf on June 09, 2012
    I really love the story and I can't wait for more :)
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  • From jujukitty on October 01, 2011
    very cute story so far, a few spelling errors throughout, but nothing too terrible. i like the OCs you've created and i can't wait to see how everybody is going to wind up interacting, especially with the whole draco/harry and draco/anita thing. keep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - Leyla on May 01, 2011
    I loved it. could you please keep writting cause i would like to know what's going to happen next.
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  • From ANON - abnagbeyl on March 31, 2011
    Whose Margie?
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  • From worriorbookwyrm on March 31, 2011
    Omg, I can't wait to read more! I love this story!

    I want to hear about the pink giraffe!
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  • From Irridescansun on March 31, 2011
    I rather liked this story. Please, update soon... Between you and me though, in the books, I find Anita rather annoying and I want to like her but I just feel for Asher you know???
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  • From krysangl on January 02, 2011
    Great start. I really like the different weres you wrote connected to Harry. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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  • From mariegilbert on November 21, 2010
    I'd be willing to beta if you need one!I love both AB and HP, and am currently re-reading both series... Also, great chapter! I'm interested to see what will happen with Draco and being rex....and all the interactions with other were's and vampires!
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  • From ANON - amanda on November 17, 2010
    I own both series and know them pretty well so if you need a bit of help give me an email. Manda_lee17@yahoo.com or mandalee17@gmail.com

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