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Reviews for Sleepless

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Freada749 on February 18, 2011
    About Ch 27:

    Soooo good!! But over so quickly! I can't imagine that the kiss did anything to dampen Malfoy's desire. I really hope he doesn't try anything stupid in the next chapter... This hour alone has me worried :S
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  • From ANON - Minue on February 18, 2011
    To be honest, as much as I love your stories normally, I really don't want Harry and Draco to get together in this one. First of all, Draco is an arrogant asshole. He cursed Harry with a curse that might kill him, and even if he did some things to make amends, he does not seem to regret it. In fact, everything he did only brought him closer to his goal - Harry. If Harry refused to work with him, he sulked. He is an utterly selfish bastard. Additionally, he is constantly bitching that Harry does not understand him and try to see his side. Well, if I was Harry, I would file a lawsuite against him and not ask him for help, least of all try to see his side. I don't understand how Hermione always takes Draco's side instead of Harry's. I mean, the guy CURSED Harry, because of his insane obsession. Hello? If at the end of this story Harry realizes he is in love with Draco and that ends the curse, that will be quite ridiculous. I kind of hope Harry will wake up and realize everything since chapter one was just one big nightmare.
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  • From SParker on February 14, 2011
    about #26..

    I take it the title means, they are FINALLY going
    to cross over that hurdle and meet each other half
    way?
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  • From ANON - polka dot on February 13, 2011
    Maybe Harry should just start pinching himself when he's dreaming. Works for me.
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  • From lordoberon on February 10, 2011
    This chapter was so short! and no Malfoy! but hey, I am very happy that Harry has decided it isn't worth it to stay in the AU, and helping Hermione was awesome! Plus, t he choking thing? that is bad...but it certainly keeps me reading. =D

    more please!
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on February 09, 2011
    Man I wouldn't want to stay in a world where your blood really matters. It's getting more and more complicated as it goes.
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  • From SParker on February 09, 2011
    about #25...

    Hunh..I've never heard of a condition where the sleeper chokes in
    their sleep, THOUGH I know a sleeper can sleep wrong where they
    obstruct airflow...hmm.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on February 08, 2011
    So maybe the dream is an alternate universe and someone doesn't want Harry to leave...
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  • From lordoberon on February 08, 2011
    PLEASE UPDATE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!
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  • From lordoberon on February 08, 2011
    I want to say, I absolutely *love* that you are involving Draco in Harry's past, and having Draco talk to Harry about how much Harry resembles James. In soo, soo many Harry/Draco fanfics, it's all about what Harry finds about Draco's past, and people make up all sorts of drama. But here you are handing us the pain of Harry's past that we know from Canon, and making Draco care about it, and be concerned over it...I love it. And you do a good job of making me understand where Harry is coming from, and also where Malfoy is coming from.

    The realization about Woburn - wow! wow!
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  • From lordoberon on February 07, 2011
    This is so exciting! I love seeing Harry in action as a barrister! I love that Discipula is more and more intriguing, and Woburn. I love that we are seeing a side of Draco with a spine, instead of just a needy childish person. But I still want Harry to end up with Malfoy. I am excited to have seen new sides of Harry and Malfoy in the recent chapters. Harry's realizations about hismelf are very interesting...I wish he would pay more attention to himself and not have such a hero complex! Dying to see waht happens next, reading on...
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  • From lordoberon on February 07, 2011
    Ahhhh! This is so exciting! I love it! I'm almost to the last chapter that's on here...but it couldn't be the end! So I must beg you - please, please, please update!!
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  • From lordoberon on February 07, 2011
    I just finished chapter 10.

    Nooo!! I want Harry to like Malfoy, not Draco! Draco is like a child, and understandably so, but he just...he doesn't attract me like Malfoy does. He's like a child who needs taking care of, not...sexy. Not...appealing. Just...sad, and sweet, and cute, but...I wish Harry were into Malfoy more.

    Argh! reading on...
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  • From lordoberon on February 04, 2011
    I LOVE the way you write Harry and Draco dialogue! For instance, this really made me laugh:
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  • From lordoberon on February 04, 2011
    OMG! Ok sorry to come off as a squealing fanperson but I just LOVE how you are characterizing Harry and Draco. I like how you are showing how they've matured, but also they still have some of their same selves to them. I would say more but it is so late, I'm not sure I can be coherent...Malfoy is still mysterious, and charming, and sarcastic...Harry is still brave, and dense, and adorable...and together...!!! Your fic is getting me into H/D again, which I haven't read in a while, but it's an old love. I'm only on chapter 6, and the dream thing is intriguing, but what I really love is the H/D interactions. Not just the kiss (the first, oh it was hot! and now they're going to dinner!). The conflict, the mixed feelings, the passion, all that stuff that makes Harry/Draco so fabulous...it is in your fic, plus so much plot and mystery,waht with the dream and how you've bounced us beyond the last book (thank you for ignoring that DAMN epilogue!). so...kudos. Kudos. I love this!
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