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Reviews for Sleepless

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From SParker on January 02, 2011
    about #20...

    Maaan, at this point I feel like I should be
    sweating bullets for Harry, he's not ready
    to take on any cases at this point by himself.
    He needs help.

    ..and WHY does Woburn remind me of Snape?

    Say, I'm not sure if you mentioned this to me,
    but have you ever worked in a law firm or know
    someone?
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  • From SParker on January 01, 2011
    about #19...

    Now THIS was nice. I liked the connection they were
    having towards the end, like Malfoy was actually getting
    somewhere with Harry for a change.
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  • From Freada749 on December 28, 2010
    About Ch 19:

    I hope Harry has his eyes and hands full of Malfoy (not Draco) more often! I really enjoyed seeing Draco making such an effort. It's different than what's usually expected of him and it seems to be drawing back some of Harry's attention. I also think that this approach, open interest and honesty, will show Harry how much Draco wants him because it's easier to accept actions than words.

    I hope this connection keeps growing but I have a nagging feeling that Draco is going to do something extremely distracting soon... and wouldn't Rita find it much more interesting to write about an illicit relationship between a barrister and his client who is being tried for crimes against humanity than whatever hate-questioning articles she's been posting now? I think she would but I hope she doesn't get the chance.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on December 27, 2010
    That would be weird is Disculpa is like someone Harry isn't familiar with, then how can his mind construct her?
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on December 27, 2010
    Amazing story! I'm glad harry and malfoy are starting to open up to each other more. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From SParker on December 19, 2010
    about #18..

    okay, there won't be any unforseen consequences from
    them waking Harry abuptly will there?
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  • From ANON - polka dot on December 19, 2010
    Poor delusional Harry. He still doesn't get that the people in his dreams aren't real. Though he has to sleep and so if he's gonna dream anyway he might as well do what makes him happy.
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  • From Freada749 on December 19, 2010
    About Ch 18:

    I'm not sure what to make of Ron's comments in the beginning of the chapter. It seems like he knows something that Harry doesn't that would help him but that he's not sure whether or not he should help Harry out by flat out telling him. Maybe because Harry is so used to the Ron in the real world telling him what's up all the time he didn't notice when this Ron was subtle, or maybe I'm reading into this too much.

    I find the image of Hermione and Malfoy scribbling notes on clipboards while Harry sleeps and then putting there heads together in intellectual agruements while Harry pouts in his pyjamas absolutely hilarious! I would like to know what's going through Malfoy's mind as he watches Harry sleep... :D
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  • From Freada749 on December 14, 2010
    About Ch 17:

    This has nothing to do with anything in the story but I just wrote what was possibly the worst exam I've ever written and coming home to find this story updated was... well, it made my day a little more tolerable. Thank you for that.

    I look forward to the ways that Malfoy will make himself a bit more dangerous. That sounds delicious!
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on December 13, 2010
    Amazing amazing story! So fascinating, I just love the contrasting Draco characters. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on December 13, 2010
    I think harry let Draco off way too easy. He cursed Harry, Harry could throw his butt in prison. I think he should have just said, "this is what your'e gonna do, now do it."
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  • From SParker on December 13, 2010
    about #17...

    Man, talk about a twist in the plot..you just don't like
    predictability do you? :-p

    Soo...no more Rico Suave??? O_o
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  • From AshleyLara on December 09, 2010
    ahhhhhhhhh please please please update soon!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on December 08, 2010
    poor draco (and use readers) I can't see this ending in sex since Harry really has every reason to dislike him (and really hasn't liked him much at all)
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  • From Freada749 on December 08, 2010
    About Ch 16:

    Woah woah woah woah! Hold up! This is Malfoy's doing to begin with?!?! ...Good job there! I definately didn't see this coming even with the "something stupid". No wonder he feels so guilty! So much makes sense now! Haha! I love this ah-ha feeling! Thank you!

    I have the feeling that this is one of those spells, like Nova Cupiditas, which has no counter. You'd think that the books with those spells would have things like "Think before you cast!" and "Don't cast drunk!" written in huge letters at the beginning so things like this didn't happen. I'm a bit surprised that this is the spell that Malfoy chose to cast. I've always thought that the two of them already compelled the other's attention starting right from their school days. It was the direction of that attention that I thought he might want to change. Maybe I'm missing an subtlety of the spell that isn't help in the direct Latin translation. Now I'm interested in how much of Malfoy is in Draco and if those parts they have in common can shift the focus of the spell from dreamDraco onto realityMalfoy.

    Great job on this chapter!
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