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Reviews for Sleepless

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Techie on December 07, 2010
    Loved this chapter! And the cliffhanger of Malfoy's supposed stupidity is going to eat at me until we find out what it is, haha. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Also loving the frequent updates, please keep it up!! :D The way you keep me guessing and imagining the new plot lines that could appear is awesome, you've got a huuge fan!
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  • From AshleyLara on December 07, 2010
    great chapter, curious to know what it is that malfoy did. please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on December 07, 2010
    Harry poor stupid Harry. He really is dense.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on December 06, 2010
    about #15....

    1. Hmm...Rico Suave with a twist of lemon. It's
    still all good. But his approach was way off, he
    should have kept his mouth shut and maintained
    the playfulness.

    2. Will Harry make the right choice?
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  • From Freada749 on December 06, 2010
    About Ch 15:

    The image of Draco Malfoy in bright orange Cannons robes is extremely amusing! Especially with this character! I really hope that works out for him, if only so I can chuckle some more. :D

    Honesty instead of volatility, would have served Malfoy much better, I think. I didn't like to see Malfoy so hurt when he left but maybe now Harry will realize what he's be missing when it was right in front of him. I would much prefer the clear, striking eyes to the wide, adoring ones.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on December 06, 2010
    about #14...

    1. Lucius played with his cane.

    Oh, the fun one could have with that statment ALONE...and
    you knew that. ;-]

    2. You know Ms. Dis' spatula sounds almost like Umbridge,
    hopefully without the Pepto Bismol look for fashion. Say DID
    Umbridge wear pink in the book, I can't recall.

    3. I have this reader fantasy that Harry will find out it IS
    another universe, get into trouble [as usual] and somehow bring
    in the big guns to help him out in said universe, like Granger,
    Weasley and Malfoy.

    But, that's a whole nuther story.

    3. You know Malfoy acts cocky enough without the verbal
    assurance that he ACTUALLY won Harry's hand.

    4. By the way, saw the movie, think director Yates did a better
    job THIS time around, the last 2 times he never did seem to get
    what the HP universe was really about and couldn't feel the
    'heart' of the story. Course few things were changed, but not
    where it took away from what was really important...the hunt for
    horcruxes.
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  • From Freada749 on December 04, 2010
    About Ch 14:

    Woburn is so intriguing! There are so many things I want to know about him. Who is he really and what is his relationship with Lucius? Will he not also testify for Narcissa? How does he avoid being found except when he wants to be? What are the "other things" that he can sense about Harry besides when he is lying? Basically, I can't wait to hear more about him in future chapters and see some more verbal sparring matches.

    Narcissa's emphasis on Evans was interesting to me. I'm not sure about he character in this story but I can imagine her having various wizarding geneologies memoried and being frustrated that she can't find a place for him in her knowledge if she knew about the Potters. Could she have known Lily Evans from school?

    I'm also enjoying how volatile the relationship is between Harry and Draco is in the real world. My favourite H/D stories are those where they do address their shared history, at least in part. I'm glad they're getting to accept some of these things about each other in the real universe even when they're still running hot and cold.
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  • From ANON - techie on November 30, 2010
    I love all of your stories, you're one of the few active Harry/Draco authors that I can't wait to see a new chapter from! I am excited to see how this story pans out, and I'm wondering how Harry is going to cope with real Draco versus 'dream' Draco, and if the two are somehow connected. Can't wait to see a new chapter!
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  • From AshleyLara on November 30, 2010
    great chapter, please update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on November 29, 2010
    About # 13...

    As much as I enjoy the intrigue, WHEN will we see the
    Return of Rico Suave? HE is fun and I like to see him
    get one over Harry!

    There's nothing like a flustered Harry.
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  • From Freada749 on November 29, 2010
    About Ch 13:

    Nora Potter wanting so badly to connect with another family member in the same way that Harry does makes my heart break a little. Is it possible that she exists in the real world somewhere, so far away that we wasn't noticable before? The bit about James and Lily dying when she was pregnant was... *sighs* more than a little hard to read. I loved the little bit with Draco at the end, so sweet and so promising. :)
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  • From ANON - polka dot on November 29, 2010
    Yeah if Rita Skeeter is on Harry's side, he's definitely living in a fantasy world.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on November 21, 2010
    about #12...

    Uh...I know Harry is in an alternate world, BUT
    shouldn't he correct Draco when someone calls him
    a Muggleborn??? Isn't he 3/4 wizard? That's MORE than
    half...and a basis for a new story. :-)

    ..and Ms. 'Dracula' sure loves playing hardball,
    probably 'sucked' the joy out of things when she
    was in school.
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  • From YamiBakura on November 20, 2010
    Chapter 12

    That sonic boom you just heard was me exploding.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on November 19, 2010
    A red headed potter, could be his sister but if she's older then probably not. I think if Harry meets his parents, he'll have to realize it's all a dream.
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