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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on November 15, 2010
    about 11...

    Po' Harry, he so cornfuzzled. :-(

    Sooo...I take it if the other Harry was around, he
    would have been able to SOMEthing about the dire
    situation the AU Wizarding World is in and if I
    know my Wizarding history good enough, it seems
    like Voldemort actually picked the right family to
    kill.

    Because Neville is a loser with a capital L!

    ...and Harry needs to realize he can't have the
    AU Draco.
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  • From Freada749 on November 15, 2010
    About Ch 11:

    Hmm... Interesting. I wasn't sold on Draco's claim of the dreams being dangerous until this chapter. Now I'm convinced, curious and worried all at once. Who cast the curse, if indeed it is a curse, and why would they do it? Answers for later chapters that I look forward to. I like the man who can't be found except when he wants to be and how mysterious Lucius is with the details. I get the feeling that if Harry asked more specific questions he could learn some really interesting things from the Malfoys. The bit about Harry changing into the hero of the press made me smile because Draco said some of the things I wanted to yell at Harry.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on November 14, 2010
    Maybe Draco should rattle on Harry to Hermione. That would be insane.
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  • From Freada749 on November 09, 2010
    About Ch 10:

    Ahh! I was really hoping that Harry wouldn't completely separate the two Dracos, especially now that he's chosen the one in his dreams! The Draco in the AU seems so much younger than the one in the real world and his relationship with Harry seems too much like that between a student and a teacher or a patient and a doctor-the balance between the two of them isn't quite right for what I usually think of with this pairing. I don't know if that was your intention or not but I really hope Harry grows up and picks the more mature version of Draco in his world. Then again, maybe you'll change my mind in the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - polka dot on November 08, 2010
    I think that if Harry is the defense lawyer, he has the right to see all the evidence against the Malfoys, which so far he has not. I would be interested in what's there.
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  • From ANON - W on November 02, 2010
    Wow, Harry is getting somewhere! *sighs in relieve*
    I started thinking that all his work would be for nothing and that Draco and his parents were so bad (in this world, at least) that nobody would be willing to testify for them. But now I'm hopeful that they will survive at the end of the story. I really don't think Harry could cope with the feelings of loss and guilt if he couldn't safe his dream-Draco from execution... But prison is an other matter entirely...

    I'm also curious what happens in the real world when Harry is dreaming, so far we only know that he feels refreshed... Good idea of Draco to try this in an, as he put it, 'controlled setting'. Although I'm sure Harry feels like a guinea pig^^
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  • From SParker on November 01, 2010
    about 9...

    You know, I'm not sure if you meant to...but the AU
    elder Malfoys seem comical in a way, but not in a bad way,
    with the way they react to Harry. :-)

    They are almost childish.

    Hey, when was the last time you wrote a story where Harry
    was the aggressive pursuer?

    ...or a story with a twist like 'Keep it simple stupid', which
    I thought was clever.
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on November 01, 2010
    I think there would have to be something in that water to make Harry sleepy because a good massage won't put you out that easily. That was a little creepy like maybe Draco is hiding something.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 27, 2010
    about 8...

    Yeah, can't wait to see how you pull off
    the trial...and what Ri..er..Malfoy does
    to get Harry to give in.

    Man, it sucks to go somewhere else to read reviews.

    But, I..as well as others..really appreciate the
    acknowledgement. :-)
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  • From Kayrox133 on October 26, 2010
    Omg, you are not the only one who knows the song Rico Suave. Lol. That was back when MTV played music videos. Then later MTV2 played music videos. Now...well that is what satellite radio and the Internet is for. However I am off the intended subject here. Another interesting chapter where one wonders what is Lucius playing at? Doesn't he at least want his heir to stand a chance? Hermione is so different but given how much of a dork Neville is in the AU, I can see why. Her boss is definitely sneaky though. Might she have been in Slytherin? I wonder if she was smart enough though for the House of Salazar. Given her predisposition regarding Death Eaters, she probably thinks they are all Dark Arts practitioners.
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  • From ANON - W on October 25, 2010
    Great job!

    So it starts^^ Harry begins to confuse the two worlds (at least a bit) and told Draco the truth. Nice touch to let it be Draco who hears the story first! Although Ron and Hermione probably will be pissed^^


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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 23, 2010
    about #7...

    Part of me just wants to go..'Wooo!!! Go Draco!!!!
    Rico Suave in full effect!!!' and the other part
    is like...'Oh what the hell..' :-)

    Is amazing how you're able to separate the two
    Dracos into two personalities. One is a 'man of the
    world' and the other still seems to maintain his
    innocence.

    It'll be interesting to see how this ends...
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on October 22, 2010
    maybe Lucius is thinking he can throw Draco under the bus to get himself off
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on October 19, 2010
    Splendorous! Tasted is indeed one of the best adjectives to use in that situation ;). Thank you for updating once more, please do so again when you have the opportunity.
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  • From ANON - W on October 17, 2010
    Nice! Thanks for your dedicated work!

    I really liked that Draco1 opened up. His silence and lack of background-information made me slightly suspicious^^
    I also liked your reasoning for his actions. But I'm feeling a little torn: I can't decide which Draco I like more and, let's face it, there's only one Harry... Who's going to get him, I wonder? And won't Harry forever mourn the one he had to give up, eventually??

    Your description of the other Ron and Hermione shocked me! I hope that they also find happiness in the end...
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