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From ANON - SP777 on October 16, 2010
about #6...

1. Hah! You GO Malfoy! :-D

2. Okay..OKAY! Harry knows what he's doing...Ms. Dracula
isn't a snake, just a biatch and Draco Malfoy proved he
is Rico Suave. :-)

It's a song, if you're too young to know what I meant
by that or should I say you were too little at the
time it came out.

3. But I AM getting worried that I don't think Harry will
be able to present a convincing case with the Malfoys,
UNLESS he does some serious homework. I can see him saving
Draco and possibly Narcissa, but not Lucius.

4. ...and where IS the other Harry??? I know he HAS to be
living in the muggle world, that is IF he didn't meet the
same demise as his parents. Because personally the AU Ron
& Hermione need him...in a way.
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From ANON - polka dot on October 16, 2010
It's like a wonderful life, only Harry wasn't about to jump off a bridge. I think Harry needs to see if he can throw Lucius under the bus and try to get the other two off. He's really irredeemable.
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From MlleKathy on October 15, 2010
I'm new here and this is the first story I've read... I'm in love with it. :) Please continue!
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From Claushiru on October 15, 2010
Is it also likely that James Potter never existed in the dream world as well? Someone of the Order of the Phoenix would recognise James' familiar traits on Harry otherwise since they are practically lookalikes...

I enjoy the switch between the two worlds! Keeps me wondering about how Harry's doing with Quidditch player Draco and what's going on with imprisonned Draco. I wonder though, are the dreams going to create problems for him in his reality eventually? Won't he question more seriously why he's having those dreams? I wonder if he can get hurt in the dream... he assumes it's a dream and that he will be fine, but we don't really know for sure!! Keep updating, I love this story :)
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From ANON - SP777 on October 13, 2010
about #5...

Well now, me thinks Harry is about to hit a wall in
this alternate universe, hope he has headgear. Because
he still doesn't know what he is doing.

..and this Disculpa[???]..aww hell I'll just call her
Dracula from on...she reminds me of a freakin' snake.

ALSO, it is without a doubt...Malfoy is crushing on Harry.
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From ANON - polka dot on October 13, 2010
Oh Hermione's bitter, but I can see that. she definitely would have not had heroic tendencies without Harry around.
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From ANON - anonanon on October 10, 2010
Interesting. I'm surprised that Harry hasn't thought of his sleeping experience as travel to an alternate universe yet, what with the vividness of his experience and the lack of memory loss when it is over. It sounds like astral projection on a linear time-line reached through a single point of this consciousness. Am I getting warmer? Regardless, thank you for updating this wonderful story once more, please do so again when you have the chance.
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From Ritinha on October 10, 2010
I'm so curious about all this! Is the action in the "dream world" in the present time? or could it be that it already hapened? Maybe real Draco knows something about it.... oh, I really want to know! Great story so far*
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From ANON - W on October 10, 2010
You got me confused there... If the Malfoys are so uptight about their blood-purity and even willing to sacrifice their son, what does it take to convince them otherwise?? I'm at a loss there...

I just HOPE that Harry doesn't confuse his feelings for either Draco with the other. That would probably lead to misunderstandings and though we don't know what RL Draco really thinks or feels yet, I don't think he deserves to be liked or disliked for something he never did. Everybody deserves to be liked (or loved?) for who they are...

By the way, what happened to the dream-Harry? He has never been mentioned so far...
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From ANON - SP777 on October 09, 2010
about #4...

1. The Malfoy Deaf and Dumb Society...hello! :-)
That's too funny!

But I understand where Lucius is coming
from...staying true to yourself, without
losing who you are.

I wonder if Harry can get Malfoy to tell
him something that ONLY a Malfoy family
member would know...something in a latin
phrase or what a father would tell the son?

2. Will Harry in his 'infinite' wisdom...be
able to tell he's truly 'not in Kansas' anymore?

3. Is it just me or is the other Neville a complete
wimp??? Because I smell a conspiracy theory..and it stinks.
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From ANON - SP777 on October 06, 2010
about #3...

Now, THIS was interesting!

I'm amazed how different you made both Dracos character-wise.
The first Draco seems like the Draco we know..young & still
inexperienced [in a way] and the alternate Draco is more adult,
refined and...restrained somewhat.

It'll be interesting to see how you put this together.

Oh, and loved Harry's moves on the broom and nice touch on
his catch.
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From ANON - anonanon on October 03, 2010
How intriguing! Please update this once more when you have the chance, this seems really interesting.....
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From ANON - SP777 on October 03, 2010
about #2...

1. Discipula??? O_o

Cooool!!! ^__^

2. ..and is it JUST me or was Draco flirting???

3. And no matter how much Harry tried to talk to them, no matter what he said, they wouldn
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From ANON - W on October 02, 2010
Hm... these dreams are certainly interesting...

I wonder if the prejudices the Malfoys obviously have will prevent Harry from helping them at all. After all, pride is only worth so much when you're dead^^
And the real Draco (how am I supposed to call him? Draco 1 or the Quidditch-playing-one?) is really acting strange. I mean, this insult to Harry's figure (and I just know that it wasn't true at all!) seemed like he was relapsing into his old-school-self. Which Harry, by the way, doesn't seem to like at all. And wouldn't it be counterproductive for Dracos intentions -which seem to be sexual- when Harry is angry with him??

Ok, just one more question:
You said that Harry will have a realtionship with both Dracos. Wouldn't you (and Harry) consider that cheating, especially because they are so unlike each other??

As you can see, this story is a bit confusing for me. But I like the idea behind it and please: More soon? I really liked this chapter!
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From ANON - Mehla_Seraphim on September 29, 2010
I like this story so far. I like that you didn't start off with either Draco or Harry being totally annoying to the other. And Harry as a lawyer is interesting.

Also do you read your mail on your LJ? I'm sure your probably get a lot. I was just curious if my message went through.
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