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Reviews for Harem of the Ancient House of Potter

By : SSJ04Mewtwo
  • From snichol98 on January 12, 2011
    it is a very good story and I would certainly volunteer to do proof reading if you would like.. I have written a few stories and they seem to get lots of hits--they are not fanfic but garden variety adult stories ranging from bdsm themes to all out orgy scens...let me know
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  • From ANON - shawn on January 12, 2011
    im glad ur back.
    ur the only one left thay writes harry fics that doesnt involve him being gay.
    anyways great fic. i hope u start some news too.
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  • From DarkXavier on January 10, 2011
    SSJ,

    I must comment you on one HELL of a story so far. I'm a fan of female submission and orgies and all the like. So far your writing is astounding and your imagination is so much fun! I love the Harry Potter characters. I read the books as a child and have had a connection to the series ever since. Please, please continue to do your very best to continue your work on these stories! I eagerly anticipate being able to continue reading them! I can't wait to see what you come up with in the future chapters! And, if I may, can I offer a suggestion for your next chapter should any of Harry's lovely ladies fall out of line? I always thought that the idea of having a woman walk around during the day with a big vibrator inside her would be a huge turn on. Maybe, with Harry's powers, you could have them wear them during the day and give him the ability to control when they're on and when they're off? Just a thought. It'd be a good way to get them incredibly horny for no good reason at all! ^_^

    Keep up the good work, SSJ! I hope your muse gets a kick with this review!

    -DX
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  • From ANON - Ragnar on December 19, 2010
    I loved this story! Please update soon :D

    It seems at your writing it, your getting better and better!

    Question: Is ginny still being fucked by nevile as punishment, or because she likes it?

    Anyway, again, I implore you, please update :D


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  • From on December 16, 2010
    With all due respect, I don't think that Hermione should be the 'alpha dog' that you are making it out to be. It should be a partnership between all the girls, not a wolf-pack type situation.... hell, even in wolf-packs, you are allowed to challenge the Alpha female!
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  • From ANON - witowsmp on December 02, 2010
    ...Tonks's Auror trained body and Harry's quidditch toned body...
    I have 2 tiny comments. 1) Tonks' body is whatever shape she wants it to be, so talking about it being auror trained is irrelevant. 2) Sitting on a broom all day does not tone a body. Quidditch by definition would never help anyone get into shape any more than sitting on a recliner.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2010
    awesome job keep up the good work fantastic story and excellent writing as well i hope you continue to write this story for everyone to enjoy
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on November 19, 2010
    with a safe guard like a loyallty oath that shuts your body down there would be no way to get into such a goverment by tom and his people since even if you tried kidnapping the persons family the oath would see that as an attempt to overthow the goverment and shut the persons body down. spys would do no go either since the moment they took the oath there own magic would shut the down. reading there mind is no good since thier own magic would rather kill them then allow them to be used to overthrow the goverment. such an oath in great britain would likely have stopped a great number of dark lords from being much of a real threat.
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on November 19, 2010
    what i would like to hear and have not yet is about the attacks on voldimorts bases. the attacks were to take place about the same time as the welcoming feast or shortly there after. an i am rather sure tom knows if 17 of his bases and 143 deatheaters were taken down in a 2 hour time span so it is not like it is a big secret.i mean once someone goes to one base an finds out it was weiprd out they will report to tom and he will have all the other bases checked. i think it would also be smart to start keeping deatheater prisoners at different prisons around the world so it would not be so easy for tom to get him deatheaters back by simpley attack only one prison, which of course tom has shown he can walk into whenever he wants. also toms main power base is england so he would have a harder time getting his people back without have men on the inside unless his troops use mind control curses. of course even then it takes time to scout out the right person to control. personally i think other countries would have defences against things like that in the way of loyalty oaths that would shut there body down if an outside force tried to take them over.
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  • From ANON - Lord Lee on November 16, 2010
    Great!!!!I love the tonks storyline.the explanatoion of how Harry feels about people in generalis spot on.keepit comming,looking forward to the next chapture.
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  • From Destructioncss on November 15, 2010
    Keep up the good work, its good to see these getting more chapters again, and hope you guys can spit them out a bit faster :D

    And I'm loving your angles on the characters, :D
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  • From StillHorny on November 15, 2010
    I am so loving this story!!! Sex, sex, and more sex; it is a wonder that anything is being learned in school.

    I love that Neville has taken 'his' girls in hand *evil snicker*

    I like that Lin has the ability to take ALL of Harry down her throat, who knew she had such a talent. I also, love that the harem are quite capable of taking care of each other (and even others outside of the harem) to 'address' their needs. Harry does need to spend some time outside of the bedchamber!!!!

    When will Tonks learn?!?!?!?! I think she just want Hermoine to truely punish her, maybe bound and flogged or even a good pegging? Then Tonks can be Hermoine's ultimate submissive; like Bella and Lin are to Harry.
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  • From newtothis on November 15, 2010
    good she still mad at ron, funny you think she would understand, the girl he love was with some else. love the line ron going claw hunting that him he defend those he loves.
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  • From on November 15, 2010
    Definitely a great story so far, though maybe have a future girl for harry's harem be a futa?
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  • From ANON - Lord Lee on November 12, 2010
    I just finished rereading 1-11,very good improvments...I'mrealy enjoying the story can,t wit for the ne chapters....
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