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Reviews for Harem of the Ancient House of Potter

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  • From StillHorny on October 11, 2010
    The rest of the harem MUST realize that Hermoine is a force to be reconed with. Don't make the alpha mad or she WILL retaliate! I am glad to see that she is taking her role seriously; especially in the sexual sense and not just the intillectual sense.

    I loved the part with Narcissa and the parsaltounge, that was priceless. I hope that Harry shares that particular bit of information with Draco...he will just explode.

    Welcome to the harem Tonks!! Albus is going to have a cow.

    I am curious as to why and to what end Harry will use the list of Cho's possible husbands, that he demanded from Mr. Chang?

    Since Harry has already commented that he plans to marry Bella and Cho; will he be marrying ALL of his Harem? This will truely turn the wizarding world on its ear, since the harems have only shown one 'concubine' as the Lady of the House. I would hope that he makes his marriage to Hermoine a large extravegent show for all to see...she IS is alpha after all.
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  • From StillHorny on October 10, 2010
    A bow and a thank you to the author!! I loved the Neville and Ginny scene, and the fact that Ginny got off on being spanked made it all that much better. What a slut she is, I think Neville is going to enjoy punishing Ginny in the future.

    Daphne AND Tracey are already plotting how to become part of Harry's Harem...who knew there were so many whores at Hogwarts. But than, Harry is rather HOT!!

    I hope that Albus' use of Tonks will backfire on him. Maybe Tonks will find that she is more willing to SERVE her 'Head of House' than the Headmaster. That would definatly piss Albus off.
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  • From newtothis on October 10, 2010
    the comment in ch 8, it seem that harry and hermoine do not thank to much of ron, and sad he going to stay with just one girl. like the nevil spanking ginny, and harry haveing a lot of fun. like that ron going to help keep him in check. great story.
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  • From azphxbrd on October 10, 2010
    Good chapter,

    Draco Malfoy jealousy is starting to flair up when he saw Harry with Hermoine and Cho on his arms.Two certain ladies of Slytherin and Hufflepuff are thinking about joining his entrogue of ladies.I can't wait to see Draco's rage burn him up alive when he sees Harry's bodyguards.

    I dont know about Ginny,but she diffently knows that following her mother's advice has screwed her life royally along with regretting her past action.
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  • From Rainbow12004 on October 10, 2010
    oh god i love it. 10 more stars for this chapter. Put all the star in a jar for now, still thinking of something to do with them.
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  • From Destructioncss on October 10, 2010
    Oops, sorry about that last one

    This is definitely getting interesting but the only problem i am finding with this story, is the lack of details for things.

    I think you need to get a bit more creative with details on important events,

    Keep up the good work and the harem ;)
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  • From azphxbrd on October 09, 2010
    Good chaper,
    I see you made Cho Chang his #4 women,but he did a good thing helping her out by taking her to Madmam Promphy for medical help.
    I totally agree on Susan Bones because is a Loyal friend along with her Aunt being the Head of the DMLE.I have always thought that Dalphy and Tracy were tight friends along keeping thier distance from Draco Malfoy and his dark associates,plus they are pick of the litter when it comes to the slytherin young women plus Astoria Greengrass will eventully need protection from Draco Malfoy and the deatheaters in training.Keep the good work.
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  • From ANON - A Reviewer on October 09, 2010
    I'm all for adding Susan, easily one of my favorites. As for an excuse, there's the cliche "Let's get an in with the head of the DMLE" or "old/ancient just in case marriage contract" or even just plain old hero worship causes slight stalker tendencies leading to her seeing something she shouldn't, and since nobody can obliviate... ?
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  • From voraciousreader on October 09, 2010
    I always thought that Susan and Ron made a better couple; besides, she and Luna would work well together. As Harry's Second-in-command (so to speak) he should have a few priveleges and Susan would ground Luna well.
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  • From StillHorny on October 09, 2010
    Excellent as always!!

    I have no preference as to Susan. But if Daphne is to become part of the Harem, then Tracey should definatly tag along. Besides, Harry needs at least one more "bitch" (total submissive); that will accept him 100%. Maybe Tracey should be his second submissive?!?!?

    Also, will you let us in on Ginny's punishment from Neville. That will be very interesting.

    I await your next chapter with bated breath!
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  • From Rainbow12004 on October 09, 2010
    I love it. I cann't wait to see what happen next. 10 stars
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  • From azphxbrd on October 08, 2010
    Good chapter,Well Harry dropped a bomb on Dumbledore,I cant wait till the next bomb explodes in Voldemort's hands.
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  • From ANON - random on October 08, 2010
    Great story, please continue.
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  • From Padfootsgrl on October 08, 2010
    The dashes showed up. Damn the story keeps getting better and smuttier. lol. I love it.
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  • From voraciousreader on October 08, 2010
    Looks like the dashes worked. Interesting chapter, Dumbledore's viewpoint was very effective.
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