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Reviews for Harem of the Ancient House of Potter

By : SSJ04Mewtwo
  • From ANON - Steve on October 08, 2010
    MORE MORE MORE... But lets get going with the defeat of Tom and maybe a punishment or two for Dumbledore.HAHA

    Great
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  • From Rainbow12004 on October 08, 2010
    ilove it
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  • From StillHorny on October 08, 2010
    Thank you! I just knew that Bella would be the total submissive. But to have her start out in a submissive position was even better! *wink, and smirk to the author*

    I love the smut!!!! I love how the plot thickens!

    I like how Dumbledore is completely confounded by all the Harry has been able to accomplish. And to have Harry demand a private room so that his "body guards" can stay near him, was pure genious! It is not like Albus can refuse, as Lord Black could just petition the Board of Govenors or the Ministry.

    And Tom...poor Tom, lost without his Bellatrix. He will not know what hit him!

    Now as for his Harem. He has taken each on individually. When will the girls get their time to play? Now that Bella is the total submissive or as she put it the "bitch" of the harem; will she get the opportunity to "pleasure" the other ladies? Will Harry take on two at once, or will our SEX GOD be able to take on all three at once?!?!?!?
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  • From azphxbrd on October 07, 2010
    Good chapter,Look out Tom because your most trusted minion will be spilling the beans.The ministry will eventually know the deatheater membership,Tom's headquarters,safe houses,supply warehouses,and current & future planned operations.I hope she mind recovers from her abusive past family along with greiving from her deatheater life.
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  • From StillHorny on October 07, 2010
    First off, yes, Ragnok should have been to one to meet Harry in Chapter 2. Only the Goblin King could have kept Harry calm and helped him understand the significance of the Black family ring.

    As to the smut...I am so looking forward to it. I hope that you are VERY detailed. Especially when he takes Bella; for I foresee that she will be the one who allowes Harry 100% of her core.

    But how will Harry keep all of his concubines hiden when he returns to Hogwarts? Unless he is Head Boy, or Hermoine is Head Girl.

    When and how will Dumbeldore react to the fact that Harry is the the "Head" of the Ancient house of Black? Also, what else is in his parent's will that the Headmaster is so afraid of?
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  • From Padfootsgrl on October 07, 2010
    Stick with what you wrote, someone that powerful would have the head goblin to talk to. another good chapter by the way.
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  • From voraciousreader on October 07, 2010
    To answer your question, Ragnok is the better choice, as Harry is now what a muggle bank would consider a top-ranked 'preferred' customer/client. Griphook was working the front desk and obviously wouldn't be of high enough status for such a large account. I like not making Ron an ass, it gets old after a while; also, the Black sisters are an unusual twist that will make for some interesting developements, I'm sure. You have a few typos and some mis-chosen words that you might want to go back and clean up in the earlier chapters. For example: in ch. 3 there are commas on your pause marks (I just...,I don't know...,sometimes). just the three periods, no commas are needed. I like it so far, don't get me wrong; it's just a bit distracting when I'm reading. Waiting for more.
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  • From Rainbow12004 on October 07, 2010
    Oh this story is getting better and better. But what happen to Ginny. I can't wait to see if they more like Bella.
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  • From azphxbrd on October 07, 2010
    Good last few chapters,I have been playing catchup.I am glad you answered my question chapter 2,I bet James fantasy was to younger Petuna.I am glad that Hermione hooked up with Harry and solved the Love potion spiking problem at the Weasleys.I see Narcissa was in deep trouble,all I can say Tom and Bella set her and Snape up royally using Draco as the bait.Now that Narcissa one of Harry's women,they are going screw the Malfoy resouces up under Tom's flat nose taking half the Malfoy fortune and ten percent to the goblins which adds up to sixty percent of Lucius's vault.OUCH! Narcissa is highly motivated to get back at Bellatrix,watch your back Bella along with you Tom.
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  • From newtothis on October 06, 2010
    so many people when they write a harry and hermoie or harry and haram, they make ron a jerk, and act like ron and hermoein where never friends, so thank you for makeing him a good guy.

    some time you need a guy to keep you in line, but hemonie can try.

    draco going to go ape shit, harry sleeping with his mom.

    keep writing.
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  • From pfeil on October 06, 2010
    Ooh, so he gets Gabby in the future? Nice.
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  • From Rainbow12004 on October 06, 2010
    I love it
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  • From newtothis on October 05, 2010
    i like this story so far, i love that ron not a jerk. and i hope that ron and hermoie be come best frineds.

    ron with luna and a nother girl would be cool they could teach him some how to be a better man.

    ron could stand up to harry to make sure he does not go crazy with power.


    as you can tell i am a ron fan, harry and hermoine can work.

    good story.
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  • From ANON - Shawn on October 05, 2010
    lol Yah.
    great 3rd chapter.
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  • From newtothis on October 04, 2010
    i just hope this is not one of there story, where ron turns into a jackass, and every body hate him. i alway thought if harry going to have a lot of summive women it would be nice to have a best friend that would stand by him, and tell him when he going over bord.
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