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Reviews for Harem of the Ancient House of Potter

By : SSJ04Mewtwo
  • From ANON - murdrax on February 25, 2011
    hmm cool chappy so eedgecombe wants to play hard ball huh silly old fool!!
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  • From ANON - agnar on February 25, 2011
    Your having snape as headmaster in this fic has a huge problem compared to canon. It happened in canon because voldemort had also taken over the ministry by that time, so there was no one to challenge it, no one to declare snape a criminal.

    But in this fic, you're having snape get the job despite the ministry still being under scrimgouer, who thought snape was a deatheater as much as harry does. Why on earth wouldn't they just arrest snape, like was tried by fudge in ootp? The ministry was able to appoint umbridge to the head job back then when dumbledore went on the run.

    So it really makes no sense at all that snape could kill dumbledore, flee the scene with the DE's, but still get the headmaster job unless the ministry is controlled by voldemort. ootp proved the ministry CAN interfere in hogwarts and override the board in many ways, I just don't see rufus not doing that here and declaring snape a terrorist criminal, inelligable to hold the position and appointing minerva or someone instead.
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  • From LordWilliam76950 on February 24, 2011
    Sorry I haven't been able to review lately. Still enjoying the blood, guts, and smut!
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  • From StillHorny on February 24, 2011
    OMG...doing IT during the wedding; that was PRICELESS!!!!

    I love where this story is going. There are plots and sub-plots and you NEVER know what will happen next.

    If you and Dark Xavier ever wish to have Hermoine have a flashback, I would like to request that it come from "Price to Play the Game" After Harry's meeting with Dumbledore regarding Ron and Nott's duel, he is angry and frustrated..."after that encounter with the headmaster he had dragged his Alpha into their bedroom and had dominated her for three hours before she passed out from the shagging he gave her." I would love to hear all of the hot, kinky, sticky, sweaty, and lurid details of that particular encounter!!!! But as you know, I am a slut for a Dominate/submissive smut scene.

    As always, more please!
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  • From Destructioncss on February 21, 2011
    I am loving this story develop, so many random ideas put together in a good manner to keep the reader going. +1
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  • From ANON - Tommy on February 20, 2011
    Please make a scene between the real Mrs. Granger and Harry! Like in the super or something, after she was spying on Harry/Hermione/Tonks. Please!
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  • From StillHorny on February 19, 2011
    Dearest author,

    I know that I have been away for a while and I am sorry. I just finished chapter 19 and am so glad that you took my idea about the strap-ons. The smut with Luna was priceless. And Hermoine definately let the new submissive know just how DOMINATE an Alpha that she is. Bravo *reverant bow to the author*

    I will be catching up on the rest of the chapters. I am glad to be back and pick back up this wonderful smut filled story!!!!!
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  • From ANON - cwest on February 19, 2011
    im happy you found a new beta im sorry i had to quit

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  • From ANON - bill560682 on February 18, 2011
    now if su is a member of a family of assasins would she not know muggle ways to kill a person as well. i mean what better way to cover up a killing by a magical person then to use muggle means. who would think a hitwizard killed someone if they are found with a bullet to the head or muggle poisons in thier system such as a drug overdose on cocain. so su should be able to teach the harem how to shoot guns so they can kill tom's deatheaters from a distance. such as using a rifle with a scope to shoot them from 500 or 600 yards away or more. tom would have no clue that it was harry's girls killing his men since they would be getting a bullet to the head, he would think it was the muggle goverment taking them out. not to mention it is much safer shooting someone from 600 yards away rather then 10 feet away.that is what i was hoping was going to happen when tom attacked the muggles in london was that tom brought some deatheaters with him and sue was going to start dropping them dead with a rifle while harry and tom fought. then of course tom gets the better of harry and gets run off after su shoots him in the chest.
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  • From ANON - murdrax on February 17, 2011
    wow now that was a hot chappy opens windows to let the steam out hehehe!!

    i think it would be funny as hell if lord edgecombe walks in on his daughter bangi9ng nott his reaction would be hilarious!!
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  • From Destructioncss on February 17, 2011
    Nice Chapter!
    Would have been a real shocker if it was her real mom. Lol

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Shawn on February 16, 2011
    Great chapter
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  • From ANON - murdrax on February 16, 2011
    new chapter was intersting but also a disppointment got used to prety much every chapter having harry banging his ladies lol!!
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  • From BlueAlquimista on February 15, 2011
    Typical superHarry, wonderHermione, stupidRon... It coudn't be more ridiculous!...
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  • From DarkXavier on February 14, 2011
    Keep up the fantastic work, SSJ! Your stories are great, although I do notice they've shortened in recent chapters. I'm sure you can find ways to keep them interesting at length. Perhaps you might consider increasing the interactivity of the Harem with the town? There's got to be more to it than just the pool and the streets. I know that small towns usually have community gatherings (dances, markets, concerts, etc.) and such on a weekly basis. Maybe Hermione could reconnect with an old muggle teacher and introduce Harry to him or her?

    Also, I noticed your chapters of late have some spelling and grammar errors. If you'd like, I'd be happy to Beta for you and help you fix them up a bit. In return, maybe you could look over some of my work? I'm working on a Harem fic, myself. It's a little kinkier than yours, but a Harem fic just the same. Plenty of smut to keep the senses occupied, as well. Let me know. My email is svtdriver86(at)gmail(dot)com.

    Thanks, and keep up the fantastic work!
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