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From bill560682 on February 03, 2011
the fake malfoy sr. namely tonk's is going to lay things out to fudge as such."the other ministries of the world will likely want to charge great britain 10 gallions an hour with 10 hour work days 7 days a week. which would be 35,000 gallions a week per ministry and 100 ministries would be 3.5 million gallions a week. now since the ministry would never pay those prices then it will take monthes to come to an agreement everyone is happy with." now harry potter can afford to pay hitwizards those kinds of prices and will since once everything is said and done he will claim spoils of war rights on behalf of the potter family and make at least 10 times the money he spent plus several more titles. harry could afford 3.5 millions a week for more then 100 weeks which is almost 2 years. now fudge could come up with the same idea of claiming spoiles of war but since house potter is the one in a blood fued with house gaunt thier claim takes first place.
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From ANON - John Bradley on February 03, 2011
Hey. I love your story so far. It's rare to find a decent story with smut and plot. It's amazing. As for the smut, I honestly don't believe there is enough. I feel the scenes should be longer as well.
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From bill560682 on February 03, 2011
now since malfoy sr. is now a wanted man they would need to meet someplace other then his office an when fudge wants to know why malfoy would want him to rent aurors from other countries that is simple, fudge has to be seen as doing something to help in the war to keep his job but ironing out the finer points such as how much they get payed and how long they stay could take monthes if not longer. so thereby fudge seems to be doing something but in fact is not because it is not fudges fault the other ministries are trying to rob him blind or at least that is what he will tell the papers every time they ask.
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From bill560682 on February 03, 2011
i think getting a dark arts detector to be able to detect the dark mark would greatly cut down on the number of death eaters out there. just have a few hitwizards with the detectors roaming around the ministry plus some in hogsmeade and daigon alley an within a week you will have a good chunk of tom's marked death eaters all locked up. an no i did not say anything about them being locked up in the ministry so they could bribe thier way out. house potter has a blood fued with the gaunt family and it's allies so thereby he can take prisoners of war in that fued.
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From bill560682 on February 03, 2011
as for how tonk's can use her powers more i would think her making herself look like someone from the wizumgot such as malfoy sr. an then bribing fudge to vote the way she wants would be great. the fudge family may only have one vote but he likely has enough others he can blackmail and bribe to vote his way. an as a result that would likely tip the scale of the vote in his favor. an the type of vote you would want him to vote with you on would be a big one like having aurors from other countries brought in to help fight voldimort by renting 50 aurors from each of the other ministries from around the world so that the country gets 5,000 aurors in the field right away, instead of having to wait 3 years for them to be trained.an with all the money harry has i think he could cover the cost to rent hitwizards to join in the fight as well so that the country gets 10,000 new troops in the fight right away.
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From bill560682 on February 03, 2011
now i think harry would have very little to worry about from lord edgecombe trying to bankrupt him be wipeing out his businesses. the reason for this would be the black family money. the blacks are purebloods but have a home in the middle of a muggle area, why. the reason is simple all the land around that home belongs to the black family. you see the black family would have bought that land several hundred years ago and until about 100 years ago it was only used for farming until a very smart member of the black family chopped it up and started renting it to muggles. so that the muggles were now paying to fund the dark lords who are bent on wipeing them out. so most of the money in the black account now is just the profits from the muggles since the end of the war with voldimort. an the house is or was only ment as a vacation home so they could sit back and laugh at the stupid muggles working so hard to pay the rents that in fact are the money being used to wipe them out. now of course no member of house black that is in the know about this can give away that secret without dieing which is why no other purebloods have come up with this idea.
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From newtothis on February 02, 2011
what you had ron lost that sucks, and how would loseing the fight make them lose the slave.
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From ANON - bill560682 on February 01, 2011
as far as lord edgecombe goes i would see him thinking just like any other pureblood. namely that money rules the world due to the fact it is needed to bribe people as well as pay to get blackmail information on people. so i would see him going after the businesses to limit cash flow. but the pruvell family are an old family thought to be dead until now so they likely have old debts owed by other families to them. so when you add in debt plus interest plus penalties you could wipe out a great many families.

as far as harry being to strong i say no, because the way i see it tommy boy can steal magic from his followers threw the dark mark. so for harry to be tom's equal he has to be as strong as tom and all his deatheaters. that would also give a reason for tom being ready for a fight with harry right after his rebirth.an of course since most people would not likely use their full powers often then they would never notice tommy boy leaching part of thier power from them.

as far as tommy boy fearing dumbledore that is a joke. if voldimort feared albus he never would have spend all of harry's first year at hogwarts trying to get the stone, he would have just drained off qurrells life force to get a new body as young tom tried to do to ginny. also young tom did not fear dumbledore otherwise he would have just taken ginny over early in the year and left to a safe place an drained her life force from her. also he would not have sent crouch jr. in as mad eye moody he would have just had someone kidnap harry while in hogsmeade.

now i do not recall if harry is heir to any of the founders or not in this story but i hate it when he is but never uses that power to boot out people like snape.fulsom
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From ANON - Hi on February 01, 2011
So what are you planning for snape...maybe have Harry find out he loved Lily and use Tonks ability to mess the shit out of his mind? That would be sweet
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From LordWilliam76950 on January 31, 2011
I don't know why but I think Gabrielle is suited for either Slytherin or Hufflepuff. To add to the slavery thing- Marietta should also do some resisting even though it probably won't be much: have her do some back talking no matter what Ron or Luna do to her.

Witches not being equal to men? I think not! Perhaps Edgecombe and Nott should look into Magical History concerning Headmistresses of Hogwarts as well as women who had been Ministers.
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From ANON - cwest on January 31, 2011
this is the absolute best fic ever keep goin with it now on to buisness gabby should be put into hufflepuff because of her loyalty to harry
also i believe that the story shoul continue with them going to school for seventh year and a strugle for the school between harry and snape would be absolutly awsome. i just have one piece of critizenum the story needs some more smut i know you sarted with some really good stuff at the begining but it sort of went down hill after chapter 13 if you are still looking for a beta i would love to do it for you just email me with your answer
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From ANON - steve on January 31, 2011
I say no extra villain. Just keep doing what you are doing and with Dumbledore being the way that he is, that is a 2nd antagonist.
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From celticdewin on January 31, 2011
Enjoying this. I hope to read more soon. Any chance of there being more Remus in it? Sorry he is a favorite of mine. I love the way you are developing the characters. Would also love to see more of Nevil and Ginny. That was a fun arrangement.
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From ObsesiveReader on January 30, 2011
Intresting are we ganna get any peeks into neville and Ron's lives?
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From LordWilliam76950 on January 30, 2011
I'm very looking forward to seeing the coming conflict between Lord Edgecombe and Harry- personally, I'm kind of hoping that it comes to a draw with Edgecombe allowing Harry to be a part of the Wizengamout while Harry frees Marietta as well as never enslaving another against her and her family's will.

Naturally, of course, the rebellion should last for a few chapters before an agreement is reached.
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