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Reviews for Harem of the Ancient House of Potter

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  • From newtothis on January 30, 2011
    thanks, harry was born with every thing, ron was more like real person, feel not love my his parents, the girl he loves does not love him. and he mess up a lot, so i like this story, show ron growing up a little
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  • From LordWilliam76950 on January 29, 2011
    I honestly think that it should be Edgecombe to lead the rebellion against Harry since it was his daughter that Harry unfairly forced into slavery. No decent father would put up with a teenager-no matter how powerful or from what house - calling the shots in his own family.
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  • From Bubbahork on January 29, 2011
    I will cast my vote in favor for Li sue joining
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  • From LordWilliam76950 on January 29, 2011
    I've always had a soft spot for Gabrielle but I would have retconned her physical age a bit and made her at least a teenager.
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  • From marinepotterfan on January 29, 2011
    I cant remember how many he has in his herem right now but I would go with 12 ladies and Harry for a total of 13.

    Flure's Grandma's name Celestine-Feminine form of French Celestin, meaning heavenly

    Thanks for writing
    MPF
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  • From newtothis on January 28, 2011
    love the ron and luna part
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  • From LordWilliam76950 on January 28, 2011
    I believe that Harry is becoming just a little too powerful. I think that it's time that a group rose up in open rebellion against him.
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  • From ANON - orkchild on January 28, 2011
    I think that the ones that will need the most catch up would be the former Mrs Chang, and the former Mrs Greengrass because of their former husband's treatment.
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  • From on January 28, 2011
    Annabelle Marie for grandmother Delacour? I would say that Susan or hermione need the most training. Hermione has never really tested under pressure that well.
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  • From ANON - insanecellist on January 18, 2011
    I was so happy to see new chapters for this story. I've very much enjoyed it so far and it just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to find out what happens with the next lords on harry's hit list. As for Astoria...really don't think she should be made a part of the Harem but if Daphne becomes a Peverell and Harry takes down lord greengrass, could you somehow have Daphne adopt her so she becomes a Peverell too?
    Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - shawn on January 18, 2011
    why not lol
    sisters should stick together just like cissy and bella. plus u cant leave her by herself in slyethrinhouse..she'll get jumped to get bacj at daphane
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  • From marinepotterfan on January 17, 2011
    Great chapter,

    Daphne needs to join the Harem, but Astora should just come under the protection of the house of Potter.

    Thanks for writing
    MPF
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on January 17, 2011
    I wouldn't have Astoria added to the Harem, but given the protection of the House Black, kind of like a Ward of the State. Make Harry her Guardian. She's only fourteen or fifteen, and I think that might be a little too young to add to the Harem. This will give her the protection from her father, and still maintain her virtue.
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  • From voraciousreader on January 17, 2011
    I'm just catching up, since I've missed several chapters. Liking it very much, beta'd or not, and I don't think there's anything wrong with your sex scenes, you're still finding your own style, so I wouldn't worry about it. May I suggest binding Astoria to Ron or one of his brothers? They would treat her well, and she would certainly find more fun with one of the twins or with Charlie, perhaps.
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  • From on January 15, 2011
    Please don't kill tonks
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