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Reviews for Executioner\'s Summer

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Squeeky on December 24, 2010
    I love this story. Please have some sort of mini-sequel. I'd love to see how it all ends, if they ever got to France and what happened in Britain.
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  • From ANON - Anabel on December 21, 2010
    Very imaginative story. Haunting, really. I believe that you have portrayed exactly what would happen if the whole Harry Potter story was reality instead of fiction. It is what happened in Darfur, Somalia, Serbia ... the winning side eliminates all that would disagree with it. Politics, after all, is just a difference of opinion headed by those who relish being in power. Anyway, thanks for the story. I am coninuing it in my mind.


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  • From ANON - esper on October 21, 2010
    Wow. I have no words, really. Excellent. It was excellent!
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  • From ANON - mariahs_fantasy on October 16, 2010
    Very dark story, but I loved how the characters were honest in their actions and emotions, and ironically, having Harry the savior hide his emotions. I wish I could know what happened after their escape, but the ambiguous ending is also beneficial in this kind of story. Overall, loved the story. :)
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  • From ANON - purple-er on October 15, 2010
    Good one. It portrays the war almost as it really is, ugly and in so many grays its difficult to chose between right and wrong. I always feel wary of people who too easily decide what is "right" and "wrong" morally.
    Well written and fast paced.
    Thanks.


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  • From ANON - Doctor Drarry on October 12, 2010
    I LOVE this story and I LOVE your writing!!! This was so poignant and powerful... I loved the use of the summer heat throughout, and the contrasting image of the two of them sailing away across the cool grey ocean at the end, like the fever had finally broken. There was so much anger and bitterness, and I thought Harry was really going to let Malfoy go off alone... but I was so happy they ended up together! Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 12, 2010
    Wow..what can one say. O_o
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  • From ANON - Iralima on October 12, 2010
    Oh my god. You should be a screenwriter, or author. I'm still shaking. That was SCARY. The whole way I was terrified that they'd get caught, that Ron would figure it out or completely lose his mind and would kill Harry or Hermione for some imaginary betrayal or something. Or the crowd would just go insane and start killing each other at Draco's execution.

    I've only read something like this once before, about crowds gone insane with bloodlust, and it still scares the piss outta me. You did a better job with the atmosphere than the other author though, especially the imagery of summer and sweltering heat to back up the madness. Excellent writing, definitely one of your better pieces (and I've read all of them ^^).
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  • From ANON - Mono on October 12, 2010
    Wow.

    Honestly, I think this is one of the most powerful pieces of yours that I've read. Every sentence just seemed to be placed exactly right, and the emotions were so strong that I could live them. Really, I was nearly in tears the entire way through, it was just wonderful.

    It just rings so strongly, and makes me think more about other situations like this, where mass executions are not only called for, but demanded, and how people who would never have even thought of allowing or accepting the events become just as blood thirsty as the rest. I guess the horrors those people, and in turn the characters in this story, went through just warp everything for them and reality becomes fuzzy.

    Amazing work. I hope to see even more like this from you. :)

    Mono
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