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Reviews for A Mask of Gold [Complete]

By : MallowCakes
  • From Midnight_Fairy on September 23, 2015
    Great story! I love the ending!
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  • From daisyplayer on October 29, 2011
    the ending was hilarious
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  • From wyntermist70 on February 26, 2011
    Dame I love the way you write and talk about hottt and bothered that's me from reading that great story please keep up the awesome work......you keep writing and I'll keep on ah reading.............
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  • From draecana on February 20, 2011
    ahaha! "Albus!" I love the ending. Freakin' hilarious!
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  • From MadamSlytherin on February 03, 2011
    I loved this soo much!!!!!
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  • From crissy123 on November 12, 2010
    haha this was a good short story! i hope you write more :)
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  • From maduraeva on November 01, 2010
    Hello! I really liked the premise, plot, and style of your story! Snape's costume was spot on! It just cracked me up! I loved how free the two of them were with each other, protected as they were by their anonymity.

    I think the execution of this fic was very good, despite the lack of beta support. You have a real gem here and I'd like to to help you bring out it's full potential! I've never been a beta, but I'm bilingual, have my BA, am a total bookworm, and always did well in grammar/revision. If you would like my help, please let me know--however one does that on adultfanfiction.net... I'm new here! :-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 29, 2010
    ok, now that was great..you have so got to post more to this..i am holding my breath trying not to laugh..i can just picture it.
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  • From EvaBrick on October 20, 2010
    Great story! I hope you write an epilogue. :)
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  • From oliversangel on October 19, 2010
    I about wet myself laughing at the ending. It was a lovely story, very well written. But the "Severus?!" "Miss Granger!" "Albus!" killed me. OMG. That was perfect. Gandalf the Gray...the was pretty funny too.

    Ero
    xxoo
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on October 19, 2010
    That was fun and funny at the end. Thank you for sharing! HG4eva
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  • From MallowCakes on October 19, 2010
    LOL! Thank you very much for the review! :) I didn't really have any idea who the football player was, I was thinking maybe a certain charming Malfoy we all know and love. Batman of course was meant to be either Harry or Ron, I hadn't really settled on one or the other. I was leaning more toward Ron though... but, I was leaving it up to the readers imagination.
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  • From HeartStar on October 19, 2010
    lol! I mean LOL!!!!!! That was priceless! I want another who else was at the party ! Who was batman was it harry?
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