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Reviews for Rise of the Dark Angel

By : isabel88
  • From moncollefan365 on September 14, 2011
    I'm going to start off by saying that I absolutely love this story. I can't find a whole lot to actually critique apart from a few minor typo's where it seems like either your spell check changed what you meant to say or you were just typing really fast and didn't notice the mistake. Anyway I adore the way you write the characters and look forward to seeing the update.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on September 05, 2011
    I've always been a fan of Hermoine and you've given her quite a beating here, not that she doesn't deserve it due to her actions! But maybe there is hope for her in joining Harry and redeeming herself to him!

    Great work as always, cannot wait for more!
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  • From bloodshound on September 04, 2011
    wow, quite a bit covered here. I still think killing the entire family is extreme but Har did have a point. I'm glad others are coming around though i think it might take a bit longer to crack Mio's mind open to where she thinks for herself.
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  • From bloodshound on August 28, 2011
    Now that was an interesting defense class. I know mio can think for herself... i just hope she and thee oothers won't be forced to go to far left on their moral compasses to soon. What do they do with the MB 'orphans' they make? Kids aren't responsible for the parents choices after all.
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  • From ChrisDeLap on August 28, 2011
    Ok, so this is my first review of this story because I'm a goof and just now figured out how to register with this site. Lol. But needless to say I have been fallowing Rise of the Dark Angel for a while now and I absolutely love it, with out a doubt its my favorite story of all time! I love harry dom/ draco sub storys, but this one takes the cake as it drew me in and has kept me entertained ever since. I love your twist and vision for this story. Just finished with the latest chapter and can hardly wait for the next chapter! Update, update, need update plz! =)
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  • From SilentDreamer on August 28, 2011
    Loved it!!! Want more!!!!
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  • From SnakeGirl on August 28, 2011
    I've only read the first chapter and from what I can see it's well-written. The dialog is good, the pacing is even. But you've turned one of my favorite characters into a selfish bitch and that really, really bugs me.

    I know this is your story...and obviously your version of the world works the way you'd like it to. But there is nothing in canon to back up Hermione turning on Harry. She obliviated her parents so she could follow him across the country to help him for crying out loud. I'm not sure about you...but I don't think I could give up my parents - not even for my best friend. For a teenaged character she was remarkably supportive of him - even in the face of his taking Ron's side over hers every time he had to make a choice. Hermione, as written by JKR, is a slightly obnoxious twit who is probably too smart for her own good - but she's extremely loyal to Harry and has never picked Ron's side over his - during the TriWizard Tounament or leaving Harry in the tent when Ron abandons them...and she has romantic feelings for Ron at the point in the tent so she chose him over a prospective boyfriend.

    LOL, I am not a fan of the Weasleys...but I'm also not a huge fan of bashing and that seems to be where you're headed with this. So, while your story has lots of potential I don't think I'll be continuing, much as I love a good dark!Harry story. Unless you'd like to assure me that your Hermione gets her head out of her ass and begins acting a bit more in character? Damn, I didn't even read enough to see how you treat Snape(he competes with Hermione for top spot as my favorite). It seems to me that most Harry-centric writers, that aren't writing Snarry, tend to see him as the evil villain who needs killing or placement into Azkaban as fast as their little fingers can type him there.

    Ah well, keep up your writing, it's done very well even if some of the subject material irks me =P.
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  • From bloodshound on August 20, 2011
    who cares about time between. *snatches your latest up date up eagerly.
    My cat just died and i need the distraction. So ty, your update was most timely.
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  • From Muffinmayhem221 on August 17, 2011
    I love this story!!! And all the chapters are nice and long too. I can't wait to see Harry's classmate's reactions to how intelegent he is, particularly Hermione! Lol. Please post the next chapter soon!
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  • From Kitkatislovely95 on August 08, 2011
    This is na amazing story. I can't wait to see waht happens next. I hope you can update soon.

    xoxo,
    kitkat
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  • From ElegantChaos on July 16, 2011
    I just devoured this puppy in 6 hours. I'm not usually one for chapter stories, but WOW. What an amazing fanfiction.
    So many details that just blow my mind when I think of the possibilities. I love watching the characters develop in their magic and their relationships. Harry and Draco are so wonderful together, and at first I was a bit weirded out by Snape and Voldemort but now I can't get enough of them.
    You writing style is fabulous and I love the humor you put into it. I love how you wrote Luna and Neville/Cory. What interesting twists you have, and not to mention the sex with all couples is fucking HOT.

    This fic has quickly become a favorite; I CANNOT WAIT TO READ MORE. I hope you update soon.
    -EC
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  • From YaoiMaster1989 on June 22, 2011
    It can't end there!! Please updated soon!!
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  • From SilvaraWilde on June 15, 2011
    So I did a search on the user name you told us to find in order to read the required 7 page convo about Dumbledore. However that user has no stories. So I'm hoping you will remind us to look that up again before posting the chapters you say we wont understand without having read the currently non-existent chapters on this other authors story list? Because I'm a total blonde and won't remember to look it up again if you don't remind us...

    Other than that, I'm loving the fic! Dark Harry fics are some of my favorites and yours is done really well.
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  • From bloodshound on June 04, 2011
    talk about stiring the pot... I can't wait to see when Dumbles realizes his pawn ain't so pawnish anymore. Should be classic. Yay super slyth Harry. wooooooo.
    Be interesting to see who Fawlks goes to when he finally diitches Dumbles the demented too.
    Harry and Draco are soooooooo cute together. ^^
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  • From treebeard on May 09, 2011
    I had a dream last night about how Harry and the gang return for the big reveal at Hogwarts. I think this story has captivated me.
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