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Reviews for She Will Be Mine

By : WannabeTomStalker
  • From ANON - AleaThoron on November 16, 2010
    Please keep going on with this story. I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
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  • From lemonade8 on November 15, 2010
    Whoa! Way to overreact, Draco. I think he's a selfish shit for not realizing that the feeling of her skin being sliced into felt like (actually IS technically) torture to her, that she wasn't criticizing him as being a death eater but for his expectation that she should be able to not move when facing such pain. If he really does leave a victim of violence and attempted rape to scar because of his own ego and war scars he will have a lot to answer for in his conscience. I know he's not a medical professional, but treating someone who had gone through that sort of thing (and especially one who had gone through torture before from his very own Aunt Bella) is a very callous thing. What he went through was horrible, but it doesn't compare to the victims, sorry.

    I'm very curious to see how this ends up, it's very interesting and written really well.
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  • From ANON - colao on November 15, 2010
    I'm enjoying it so far and look forward to more
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on November 15, 2010
    Merlin! I am so glad she got away, but horrified that she had to go through that in the first place. And, this chapter made me feel bad for him, too. Two lost souls needing healing... I look forward to more really soon. Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From Jullsy on November 15, 2010
    I like it a lot. A promise of a nice story. I love CSI. Can't wait for the next chapter.
    I asked for FF because you could read it from any computer and it's easier to review. But it's true that your situation is not easy.
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  • From katiekrm on November 14, 2010
    These first chapters are so sad, but I'm looking forward to more! I hope Harry gets back to her soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2010
    love it cant wait to see more
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  • From daisymaeevans on November 13, 2010
    You have a really good start here. I look forward to reading more!
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  • From Adelaidexx on November 13, 2010
    Wow... You're writing this from your iPhone?! Now, that's what I call skill, haha. Loving the story, by the way. A great start.
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  • From Jullsy on November 13, 2010
    Very good idea for the plot. Keep going! Whe don't you post on FF?
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  • From margotlefaye on November 13, 2010
    Well, I'd say you're off to an intriguing start. The horror of the scene when the carver is at work and the victim (Hermione) realizes she's going to die is nicely done. You've salted the narrative with several clues, but managed to keep the mystery.

    I do have a couple of minor language issues: Hermione would be worrying that she looked "a fright" rather than "affright" and that "pus" was "blossoming" from her eyes (ick!) rather than "puss."

    Other than that...I look forward to reading more.
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