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By : MallowCakes
  • From DarkIris on December 07, 2021

    The story was lovely; well written with wonderful dialogue. My only real complaint is the very, very trite ending, but I'm sure that's not surprising since it's in the title of the chapter. Pregnancy used as a plot device is one of my biggest pet peeves in any kind of literature, but I guess it can be justified (but only a little 😁) in a story about fairytales. I would have preferred if Severus had decided to stay with Hermione because he'd accepted his feelings for her, not because of an unintentional consequence that forced his hand (even if he didn't mind). Trite ending or not, I do like his last line. It was sweet but not cloyingly so. In fact, it could be seen as charming wit or as mildly snarky humor. Oddly enough, I'm fine with either. Thank you for sharing! 


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  • From FemmeBono on April 03, 2011
    That was sappy and sweet, and very fulfilling. ♥
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  • From xcrystaldragonx on February 27, 2011
    I've been keeping up with this story since you first posted it and apologise greatly for not reviewing each new chapter, but since you have finished, here are my thoughts. Your writing is outstanding and you weave a great story. I've had a great time reading it and look forward to reading anything else you might post here at AFF. Keep up the great work and know that there are people who appreciate what you do.
    Love and kisses,
    The Crystal Quill
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  • From alina290 on February 27, 2011
    Very entertaining. Thank you for the time and effort you placed in this story. Keep up the good work.

    Liz
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 27, 2011
    Brava! That was fun, funny and a great, fantastical ride. Yay, he didn't mess up in answering. lol "Happily ever after" my favorite type of ending. Thank you! Looking forward to your next stories. :-) HG4eva
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  • From lunababy44 on February 26, 2011
    HA.... I love being right about a piece of the story line, lmao...... well, I figured this was coming after chapter 16 anyways.... Anywho, I really liked how you played out this chapter and cant wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From wyntermist70 on February 26, 2011
    OOOOOOOhhhh my gosh you left me hanging hard I need to know what Herms is gonna tell Snape I hope its more than one child this poor fella needs lots of kids as handsome and smart as Snape and Smart and lovely as Herms I'm tellin ya lots of kids.......Keep writing I'm sooooo diggin this story.....
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  • From alina290 on February 26, 2011
    You are so mean leaving just hanging again. Thank you for the short chapters they are good.

    Liz
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  • From nekluvshp on February 26, 2011
    YOU ARE SO EVIL!!!! That was like, the ultimate cliffhanger!!!
    Obvsiously Sev put the pieces together and figured out what she wants to tell him!!!! EEEEEEEEE!!!!!! I can't wait to see his full reaction!!!

    ~nekluvshp
    nekluvshp@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2011
    Do we really have to wait for the end?
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 25, 2011
    Hi. I just snorted soda when I read that. lol I have a good idea what she's going to say. tee hee hee Thanks, luv! HG4eva
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  • From nekluvshp on February 25, 2011
    Two words: HERMIONE'S PREGNANT!!!!!
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  • From alina290 on February 23, 2011
    I wonder what happened to make Hermione leave. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you.

    LIz
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  • From lunababy44 on February 21, 2011
    I really liked this latest chapter... despite Severus's acting like a complete prat, but then at the end he kissed her back... I really liked how you played out the end of the chapter with the kiss... very 'desperately passionate' sounding in a way... Very, Very Good Job!!!
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  • From crissy123 on February 19, 2011
    ooooo i cant wait to read more!
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