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Reviews for The Snake :complete! Alternate Ending added:

By : ForgetfulLove
  • From ANON - Anon on September 07, 2012
    Omg u re an amazing writer!
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  • From Lenler on December 21, 2011
    Fantastic story.
    The original ending was very sad but I dont think this could have ended in any other way.
    But I have to say that the alternate ending was great as well and yes it screams for a sequel ;)
    I especially liked the alternate ending because you gave an explanation to why she mustn
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  • From ANON - Emily Vine on November 10, 2011
    Do you still need a beta for this story?

    I must admit, it touched my heart. Really well written, but I did notice a lot of mistakes in it that need correcting. Feel free to e-mail me if you so desire.
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  • From ANON - Autumn on October 19, 2011
    Conratulations on a story well finished! You have surprised me greatly over and over again in this story, I have been, and am, impressed! I truly enjoyed reading this!
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  • From purefaith91 on October 07, 2011
    I am not so sure "enjoyed" would describe how I am feeling when the end finally came. It is so sad. Why didn't Hermione tell Draco about LV knowing that he was a traitor? Excellent story though and very original. Thanks for sharing. Now, could you pass the kleenex please? p
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on October 06, 2011
    It was a good ending. An alternate ending and sequel would be nice, but its okay if you don't to write one.
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  • From CafeAuLait on July 09, 2011
    I feel so bad for Hermione. I'm curious about the VOX, I'd like to know the purpose of the group.

    Thanks for updating.

    I don't write Dramione fan fiction, but I would definitely visit the site.
    Dramione fan fiction,The Golden Snake, Crisscrossed Lovers, it's late so that's all I have right now.
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  • From evilcats on July 03, 2011
    Since Hermione has been bitten on the lip by Greyback, will she get werewolf-like tendencies like Bill Weasley? I'm assuming he is a werewolf in your story and he was still in human form when he bit her.
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  • From CafeAuLait on July 02, 2011
    Aww, that was sad. I hope Draco gets her way form this man or she decides that power isn't everything and leaves, although I don't think number one will let her go easily. It's about time she acted like the real Hermione Granger and used her brain.

    Thanks for sharing
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  • From CafeAuLait on July 01, 2011
    What is the Vox's history?
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  • From ANON - Martha on December 27, 2010
    Great story. I'm happy that your posting if on fanfiction.net as well as it makes it much easier for me to follow the story. Can't wait for the next chapter to be posted.
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  • From StillHorny on December 17, 2010
    I am definately looking forward to Hermoine's time with Draco and then punishment for being late from Number One.

    This sounds like fun!!!
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  • From StillHorny on December 10, 2010
    Uh, oh...what has Draco done???

    This plot gets thicker and thicker.
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  • From ANON - night on December 02, 2010
    oooowww theres a new order.
    I like this, now im curiouse to see what happens with then.
    The semissive to Draco but then also belonging to someone eles....is intresting i've not seen that befor,
    and would love to read Dracos reaction when/if he finds out.
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  • From morningstar0508 on December 02, 2010
    ok
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