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Reviews for The Snake :complete! Alternate Ending added:

By : ForgetfulLove
  • From StillHorny on December 01, 2010
    oh, the plot thickens!?!?!?! Sex, sex, and more sex; and now clandestint meetings with secret societies...WOW.

    OK, Narcissa is number two and she is not happy that Hermoine is having sex with Number One and Draco. But WHO IS Number One??
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  • From margaritama on December 01, 2010
    Um, so I've no idea where this came from and no idea what the plot is....
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  • From StillHorny on November 25, 2010
    Oh, so hot and wet!! I love the way that Draco is very demanding as a Master, Hermoine will learn not to be such a "mouthy" and disobediant submissive. But the punishment might just be worth it. *smirk, wink*

    I liked the magical clamps.

    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Bria on November 25, 2010
    This is a great story!
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  • From ANON - night on November 22, 2010
    oooww amazing story.
    And the box was simply stunning im so impressed you made it.
    I was so disappointed there where no more chapters up yet.
    So looking forward to an update
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  • From StillHorny on November 21, 2010
    Oh, this is sooo good!! I can't wait to see what Draco has in store for Hermoine. I absolutly love a Dominant Draco and a submissive Hermoine!

    But who was her prior mystery dominant? Can't wait to hear the answer to that one.
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  • From mrequecky on November 20, 2010
    Awesome :D
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  • From newtothis on November 19, 2010
    this hermoine a slut cheating on her boyfrined.

    she could tell he was head over hills for her, but she could not bring herself to love him in the same way. It was almost like kissing her brother, and he always let her push him around, he followed her around like a lost puppy. Frankly, it made her feel sick to her stomach yea right ron never let her push him around
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  • From on November 18, 2010
    This sounds really good!
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  • From StillHorny on November 18, 2010
    Oh, this is a VERY GOOD start!! More, hot, sweaty, steamy dominance...Pretty PLEASE!!!

    I await your next chapter with a flush *evil grin to the author*
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