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Reviews for As the clouds flew by, he wondered

By : Tenshinhan
  • From ANON - Medic on February 07, 2014
    Now I don't ever review story's but yours was so well writen. I much enjoyed it form start to end. I felt it needed a bit more, maybe to be a bit longer but I enjoy it nonetheless.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 05, 2011
    Nice. One of the best stories I have read here. You have nice style of writing. Awesome!
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  • From GingerCat1 on June 08, 2011
    I really hope you continue to write more Ron/Ginny fan fiction as this was a very good story. I love the idea of Ginny having secret sexual feelings for Ron and then her deciding to seduce him.
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  • From Horatius314 on February 07, 2011
    I'm gonna take a guess and say something's wrong with the encoding for tis story
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  • From Tenshinhan on December 05, 2010
    Thanks for the tip, I applied it were I found it fitting. Though I do not understand the 3 star rating: Is it really that bad? I have seen worse with five stars. I think. Would appreciate more ratings though.
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  • From ANON - horatius314 on November 23, 2010
    a good start My recomendation would be to make the dialog more fluid. Use contractions. Will Not becomes Won't. Can not becomes Can't. If you decide to use longer forms for formality, Cannot will work. Other than that, good work.
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