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By : grugster
  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2011
    Hermione in this story is very stupid and annoying
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  • From bloodshound on December 20, 2011
    I feel a bit sad that she wants to get rid of the memories of her human life, but if it's to keep her healthy it can't be helped. she's not like Sev, she doesn't have his iron will or control.
    Still, you'd've thought they'd figure by now that keeping her out of the loop will only make her stress and/or work herself into a panic. she's still so very unsure about herself. they keep telling her to be and act more confident but then doing things that stress her and erode that confidence.
    I hope Lance can help Nev too. He's even worse, confidence wise, than Mio.
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  • From coopershawk on December 19, 2011
    Great chapter. I have no idea where you're going with this but it looks good. Thanks for writing this story.
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  • From purpleann on December 19, 2011
    Oh, you're such a tease, leaving us with this cliffie! More please, I want to hear what Lance has to say!!!!

    Also it was nice seeing her with other submissives like Neil's mate (Clara?). I'd love to see more of that. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From Rookseer on December 19, 2011
    HAH!!! Knew it was Lance! Can't wait for the next update. This one was WAY TOO SHORT!

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  • From Jewels812 on December 19, 2011
    Thanks for the Christmas present of another chapter...it was great and she is finally making some small progress...love where this story is going....keep up the awesome writing and Merry Christmas
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  • From ANON - Carly on December 19, 2011
    I don't want to be mean about this, but I guess I do have a suggestion. The past couple of chapters have been kind of short. It seems like you stop in the middle of a scene, which makes it difficult to read since the chapters are posted so far apart. For example, Hermoine's tour with Lance could have been all in one chapter easily, and then ended with her anxiety about meeting the shaman. This would not only keep your readers interested, but also progress the story much faster.
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  • From ANON - colao on December 19, 2011
    yay! can't wait for more :)
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  • From sarahdaye9 on December 19, 2011
    So funny! Good trick for the Shaman though! Still love love loving your story- all the different ways they act make for very entertaining reading!
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  • From StarrCrystal on December 19, 2011
    *cries* I missed this fic so much! Im so happy that I have no school for a while so now I dont have to force myself to stay up long enough to read this fic but not grasp it! Do in love with this fic!
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  • From dragongirl on December 19, 2011
    I have to be honest I am addicted to this story.... LOL
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  • From albamezzora on December 19, 2011
    I just knew Lance would be the Shaman :D Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2011
    I've never been so into a story here, yours is so amazing please keep writting im dying to know what happens next :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2011
    just read ch 39. God, Lance is the Shaman. I'm sure of it! And was Yoric trying to protect her, because she was scared of meeting him, or was he afraid of Lance knowing how loose Hermione is, how she doesn't use their titles etc.?
    Anyway, great work, I love reading this! Update as soon as possible!!!
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  • From Rookseer on December 06, 2011
    WOW! Can't wait for more!!!!
    Lance is the Shaman isnt he?
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