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By : grugster
  • From purpleann on December 05, 2011
    Oooh I like Lance a lot. Yorik's response to him was very intriguing! I assume you'll reveal his true role in the next chapter. Also, it was great to see Amaris and Morgan again! I miss them. :) Keep up the excellent work and IGNORE people who are bitching about Hermione being out of character. HELLO this is an ALTERNATE UNIVERSE fan fiction about Hermione becoming a submissive WEREWOLF. How the *hell* could that be anything BUT different from the character JKR created? Your story is interesting and compelling and I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - nina on December 05, 2011
    Here comes the shaman :D
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  • From albamezzora on December 04, 2011
    Ooooh, so who exactly is Lance, I wonder? :) Is he actually the Shaman?
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  • From ANON - A on December 04, 2011
    Yes! Another chapter! The twists are really coming out now. . .when will poor Hermione figure out that the one she is so relaxed around is the shaman she was so worried about?? And why did Yorik have such a strange reaction? Can't wait to read more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lily on December 04, 2011
    Please please continue the story soooon. I cant wait. :D
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  • From ANON - vera on December 04, 2011
    although I really enjoy this story. this chapter just points out how much you have twisted hermione's character. sure some changes in character can be expected after a transformation to a werewolf but to this degree? I cant see any resemeblence at all to the character JK created, its as if she is any bland ditz in teh world...
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  • From ANON - colao on December 03, 2011
    ooo, I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From MalfoysBitch on December 03, 2011
    omg!! I feel chapter 40 should be posted within the next 10 minuets, please!! such suspense, who is this lance guy (the shanman perhaps or a prespective buyer?) also love the insite to her mind, love it!please dont keep us waiting to long! loved this chapter, seeing all hermiones pack together, and a bit of fenrir, this chapter is almost like an early christmas present!!
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  • From bloodshound on December 03, 2011
    well, that's a sneaky way to introduce her to the shaman and keep her from stressing. I hope he can help but at the same time I don't want Mio to just give in and conform... very puzzeling, neh? :/
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  • From ANON - The Midnight Moon on December 03, 2011
    I love this chapter. For some reason it sheds more light on Hermione as a character outside of all the sex. I love it.
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  • From dragongirl on December 03, 2011
    I can't wait for the next.... Who is this Lance, The Shaman? I hope so..... LOVE IT!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2011
    I love this chapter, Hermiones interactions with Lance show what she has been thinking the whole time and that is AWESOME!! I can't wait to read more
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  • From PinkFloydsRainbow on November 30, 2011
    Your story is brilliant and I love your original characters!
    I am just itching for Hermione/Miller.
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  • From angelnomiko on November 21, 2011
    wow that was great .. please please update soon i would love to read more.. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Ellen on November 17, 2011
    Hi, I just wanted to say I think this story is really good so far, and I think you should just stick with the storyline you're happy with as that will give you more inspiration to write more :) Also I love the character Janto! He's awesome!
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