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By : grugster
  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2011
    Ohh I am so worried about Severus I hope he is okay!! Can't wait for the next chapter =)
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  • From ANON - shidechule on October 30, 2011
    i dont usually review, since i never know what to say.....
    but since you're afraid we are losing interest, i gotta tell you: dont be..
    i get really excited every time you update, i devour every chapter you write, because i find them incredible. your writing is amazing.
    as a personal opinion, i just wish hermione would show her strength a little more, i mean... i know she's a sub, but she's allowing everybody else to stomp over her, and i cant wait for the time she gets tired of being called "stupid" and reacts.... still, that's just my opinion, and i trust you as an author, so i'm just going to wait and see what happens.

    but pleeeease keep writing!! im still reading and waiting for updates!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 29, 2011
    Loved It please update soon!!!
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  • From Bloodredrose13 on October 28, 2011
    loved the update! but im very curious as to what you have planned with severus. :) can't wait for an update!
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  • From dragongirl on October 28, 2011
    Every time you update this story make my heart so happy.... Yes I enjoy the intricate and mysterious lines that you masterfully entertained. But one plea... Two more mates. Castor and Roland. LOL I know but they are sweet in their own way.... Well the beauty is in the eye of the beholder..... LOL
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  • From bloodshound on October 28, 2011
    man, the wolf transformation really messes them over huh. so, Sev is another human minded wolf... some how that doesn't surprise me. As skilled with the mind arts and disciplined as he was it's no surprise that it would carry over... he must have a rough time with his instincts though.
    Shaman huh? That sounds troubling. I wonder if Mio will ever be mental. We;ll see.
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  • From SnakeGirl on October 28, 2011
    Yay! I was so happy to see a new chapter.

    So, Severus remembers everything...that is an interesting development. I'm a bit apprehensive for poor Severus - the werewolf mindset seems to be a bit removed from the human way of thinking. Not bad necessarily, just different, which is kind of nice since the wolves are no longer human. I like the fact that their culture is a bit alien to ours. What are they going to do...try to make him forget what happened with a potion or obliviate or beat him into submission? Poor Sev, neither option sounds like much fun for him.

    I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From coopershawk on October 28, 2011
    Still a wonderful story. Thank you so much for writing it.
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  • From ANON - laurene on October 21, 2011
    Awesome awesome story. Please dont stop posting this fic. :D
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  • From ANON - Elvra on October 20, 2011
    Oh wow. I am pleasantly shocked at how much I enjoyed this story! Normally I don't read anything like this, as it's usually not well written, but gracious was this good. I couldn't stop reading from the moment I clicked out of sheer curiosity. Of course, I'm really confused about a lot, since I started with the sequel, but that just means I have even more to read. The entire universe you have created is so exciting to me. Its like a hybrid between a fairy tale and a bodice ripper. I just cannot wait for this story to be updated. In the mean time, I better start from the beginning...
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2011
    Awesome chapter i can't wait to see what happens with Nevile and how Toric deals with his situation!!
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  • From ANON - Cocoa on October 16, 2011
    I hope Sev realises his feelings soon! Neville needs some Snape loving! Haha, I think Hermione and Fenrir are cute together. Is it weird that I hope Draco and Tara find someone who loves them as much as Snape and Fenrir seems to love Nev and Hermione? I hope they do, they need some one on one loving too! Haha I just feel slightly sad that they don't seem to have one? Even if they are subs heh. I would still read tho cause I love this fic so much! Pls update soon~!
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  • From ANON - betty on October 15, 2011
    As usual it was another totally awesome story!! Good work! I just wish you'd update more often. i die from excitement everyday to see if you've updates, but i should'nt be compalaining. Quick question: do you plan on getting hermione pregnant towards the later chapters?

    thankx
    xoxxx
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  • From bloodshound on October 15, 2011
    ty for getting back to me. No,, no websites but several e mails. I'm happy to give you one of mine (or did i do that already... need to check) my Q's have nothing to do with your story but rather several scenarios of my own based on your world. Though, I admit, i did wonder what would cause a sub to be sold cause if they were there as just sex toys... that isn't much a life and being sold would hurt their self esteem more. I understand it a bit better now. Ages clan can afford to er share the wealth cause voldi is giving them a constant influx. Do they get passed on immediately or does the alpha wait a bit, see if they're compatible an if not, then pass them on?

    Right, enough of my own Q's, on to the actual chappie. Whoa, did they just block some of Mio's memory? And Nev, surely they can't think of selling Nev. Sev would indeed lose it hard core and i think Nev would withdraw completely if they did. He's got bugger all confidence as it is. maybe Sev is bonding with Nev as a mate rather than just a sub...
    Toric, ah that poor kid. Being one of Mio's mates has really put him in a spot an she didn't even mean to.
    I wonder why they've got Mio on antidepressant potions... I thought she was starting to adjust so if they've got her on antidepressants that's kinda ominous.
    looking forward to the next up date.

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  • From dragongirl on October 15, 2011
    That was lovely! Any pairing you do is ok. Could you make Roland one of her mates as accident or the one who almost attacked her.... I know I know. too many choices but all them lovely........ Just please keep them coming. I am hungry for more........ LOL
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