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By : grugster
  • From victoriawhitten on October 15, 2011
    omg, okay this chapter has a million questions running through my head!! i want to know who they're selling, why they're selling him/her, and i really hate that they don't want hermione to know. sometimes i get really frustrated on her behalf for the things they do to her. in my opinion, being a sub shouldn't mean that you matter less than a dom, just that you choose to be submissive to them. as a member of the pack i feel like she has every right to retain full control of her body and her memory. it just doesn't seem fair to do some of the things they do to her.
    but other than that :) i absolutely adore this story. update as soon as you can!

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  • From Hollibell on October 06, 2011
    I just finished both the first one and this one and am truely enjoying your story. While I will admit some things, er, involving the heat ;) squick me just a bit, lol, it doesn't take away from my enjoyment at all and makes sense to me why its there. You are doing a really good job at combining human emotions and circumstances with the dynamics of a wolf pack. I can't wait for your next update. I think Draco is my favorite and if I recall him and Fenrir were up next. ;)

    Incidently, I actually avoided this fic for a long time because of Fenrir Greyback. I couldn't get past his canon characterization at first to read your story: I was afraid it was some kind of torture/rape fic. I am so glad I decided to read it! I will be more open now to other stories with this character from now on, now that I know he can be written as a erm, 'good' guy (relatively speaking)
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  • From MalfoysBitch on October 05, 2011
    I just love fenrir! hermione is really starting to be one with her.eolf! loved it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2011
    YAY more awesomness! I love this story and i swear it just gets better and better, i can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Betty on October 04, 2011
    Such a good chapter!!! Especially towards the end with hermione and fenrir, it was so romantic.
    Can you please write more on fenrir and hermiones relationship?

    Loved every minute, good work
    Xoxxxx


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  • From BloodTear on October 04, 2011
    This chapter was really good! I hope Fenrir doesn't let the others mate with Hermione... It just seems wrong somehow....

    Again, this was an awesome chapter!
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  • From ANON - A on October 04, 2011
    Love it! Keep on writing.
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  • From Jewels812 on October 04, 2011
    Now that was an AWESOME chapter....just the right amount of dominance but at the same time they listened to here and explained some things to her about the what needed to happen and why....so excited to see another chapter up today...glad everything went well for the changing for the main characters....
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  • From bloodshound on October 04, 2011
    wow, short one this time. I feel for darius... it can't be fun watching those four die. Still at least Mio has a bit easier time of it this time out.
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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on September 22, 2011
    ch34, herm is so caring.
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  • From ANON - sbrande on September 22, 2011
    What a great lead up to the moon.

    Looking forward to the next chapter.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2011
    awww this is such a sweet yet sad chapter it was really good! I can't wait to hear how the full moon goes with the new potion for the Dominants =)
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  • From ANON - purpleann on September 22, 2011
    Aww, Darius! I love that he is there to explain things to her. The scene with Calan was super hot, and I loved Igor flirting with her that was cute. :) When will we get another threesome with Fenrir and Yorik???
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  • From Jewels812 on September 22, 2011
    Another good chapter...i felt Severus was a bit harsh on her when she hadn't done anything to make him upset but I guess that is just his personality...if i had been Hermione i would have turned my head and not let him try to comfort me after he had been harsh for not really a good reason, but that is just my opionin...however it was a good chapter build up for the next changing and i'm glad that even if Castor doesn't survive she got to talk to him and he got to apologize...can't wait for another chapter, i surprise myself how much i get excited when I see this story has been updated...keep writing your way!!
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  • From bloodshound on September 22, 2011
    What makes an alpha decide to sell a sub, wouldn't that give a sub, who would already have major emotional issues, even more miserable? What happens if a sub has a very dom nature but like mio, keeps a lot of their human mind? would it just be beaten out of them until they were broken as it seems a lot of doms don't really care about the sub as long as they get what they want. Also, what's the general number of a pack?
    those poor kids, sucks to be them.
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