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By : grugster
  • From victoriawhitten on August 21, 2011
    Yay! I literally look for your updates every day :) i really liked this chapter but i suppose i was hoping for a little hermione/fenrir action, but i'm assuming that will be in the next chapter. i hope severus will be alright and stop fighting his wolf! as always, i love this story and i love the direction you're taking it in.

    much love for you and your story!!!
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  • From ANON - Betty on August 21, 2011
    Please update ASAP!!! Its sooo good
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  • From ANON - Jnic on August 21, 2011
    I get soooo frustrated after readin a new chapter I just want to read the rest but i know I have to wait. I feel like a child on christmas eve.
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  • From bloodshound on August 21, 2011
    oh dear, those poor turned.
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  • From Jewels812 on August 21, 2011
    Another great chapter....so much going on and getting ready for the next full moon...i'm so glad that she and Severus got some time together and glad she got to spend some other time with her mates...keep up the great writing and always remember this is your story and if others don't like it they shouldn't read it because there are others of us that really enjoy it and can't wait for updates!!!
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  • From dragongirl on August 21, 2011
    Love the possessive Fenrir it is so cute! But lucky girl she got so many to choose from....... LOL
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  • From ANON - sarah on August 21, 2011
    Amazing as always! Loved the part where they all held her in their las. Until she calmed down- dunno why, I just liked the image.
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  • From StarrCrystal on August 21, 2011
    Wow!! I thought Neville & Hermione were never gonna go at it! But Ive been proven wrong! I cant wait to see who are the new subs though!!! This is gonna be awesome!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 21, 2011
    Please continue.
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  • From ANON - thestralhorse on August 19, 2011
    OMG i just finished reading this chapter for the third time since it was posted and i only just figured out that i had completely forgotten to review it, so here it is even if it is a little late. I LOVE this chapter it is fantastic, the added level of effect the subs heat has on the dominants is great and Hermione's shyness about all of it is so perfect. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - izadleen on August 19, 2011
    Hi, congratulation for the great story....As a pup, Hermione is full of trouble within the clan. May i suggest the trouble outside the clan like the other clan know her existence and try to kidnap her or Neville and Draco?And Head Alpha Ages punish the clan with taking over the clan to make more powerful of the clan, whatever it is, waiting for the next chapter...

    PS
    I wonder if u can make a sex scene using chocolate because my cousin just back from Russian and give me a chocolate and make me remind of Igor, well good luck..
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  • From Citten on August 18, 2011
    i really liked the chapter i did not bother me that her mates enjoyed it i like thatyou did it. it makes the story yours! :) hope to read more soon!!
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  • From coopershawk on August 17, 2011
    I'm not begging you. Well, yes I am. If/when you feel like posting chapter 32, I would really appreciate it.
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  • From ANON - Molly on August 09, 2011
    I LOVE this story!!
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  • From ANON - Ley on August 09, 2011
    Another excellent chapter! Keep up the great work!
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