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By : grugster
  • From llyoung on July 30, 2011
    Thanks for the new chapter. I always look forward to new chapters from you. :)
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  • From bloodshound on July 30, 2011
    oooooooooooooh, hey, thankks! I'll start posting just as soon as I figure out what to classify it under. Does it count as a crossover if you're just borrowing the world and not the ccharacters? :
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  • From bloodshound on July 30, 2011
    I'm sorry people are rubbishing you. I mean, Mio did something stupid and was punished for it. Sure it was bound to upset people but I'm sorry they're taking it out on you. Please do keep publishing this as there are people who enjoy it... and if they don't like where the story is at, they should just leave it for a few chappies so the story can develop more.
    It seems mio has finally starting to settle in and I'm glad she pumped the other subs up a bit. If they're right, it's a privalige to have them, not a right and the doms have it in their head that it's a right. I'm glad the boys stood uup for themselves.
    Poor mio, even heat shoulden't send the bloke off his rocker like that. And since when is a fear scented no a come on. what an idiot.
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  • From ANON - jillianunleashed on July 30, 2011
    hello,

    I hope you get this, it's so hard to for me to review @ aff .net that i usually don't bother. however, you seemed like you needed someone to be nice. i really like this story and the first one. I don't like all the little parts, but i like the story and the parts i don't like fit and fit well, it's just i have to get over hermione not being human and therefore not reacting like a human would. i hope you continue to post and continue to ignore flammers or negative nacies. they're welcome to write their stories, but many do not, and of those that do, many are poor writers. you're a good writer and you're creative, so keep on keepin on.
    jillian
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  • From ANON - Aurey on July 30, 2011
    I'm so so so glad you updated. Please dont stop writing this story. :D
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  • From ANON - thestralhorse on July 30, 2011
    I love this chapter it is so cute with all the subs waking up together and then Hermione and Roland with Janto there was great!! i am so glad you posted i was getting worried that you had been put off writing the story but honestly i think that a lot of the people that have problems with how the story is going dont really understand the werewolf thinking and following of their instincts aspect of the plot. But be assured that i am totally in love with your story and I am always looking forward to the next chapter =)
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  • From Jewels812 on July 30, 2011
    I ablsolutly enjoy this story just the way you write it....my feeling on those who want to tell you how to write your story is that they should write their own then...it's one thing for someone to give an idea but to tell you how they think it should be isn't right...it's your story and you are correct about not apoligizing for what you write, if they don't like it then they shouldn't read it...i have enjoyed it and was so excited to see that there had been an update after I had been out of town for a couple of days....i do hope you continue posting this story and finish it because I think what you are writing is a fresh idea with an original plot that has so much potential...i will say I was hoping for a scene between her and Severus to talk about things and make it ok between them but again just my idea....great writing and I can't wait for another chapter!!! Keep writing and don't let the nay sayers get to you because what you write is yours not anyone elses!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2011
    AgainandAgain~
    I think you should continue to post your story. I truly believe it is one of the best I have read. There is not just a lot of sex in it, there is a plot and I at least, can see how hard you have worked on this fic. As far as flames go, my thoughts are that they are jealous of your talent. Don't let them get you down and keep up the excellent writing that you have been giving us!! I hope that you keep posting, as I check all the time for updates and it would be a shame not to be able to read the end of this story.
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  • From victoriawhitten on July 30, 2011
    Okay first of all, I absolutely love this story. So whoever is sending you mean reviews can just go jump off a cliff! I have been reading this since you started posting it and if you don't finish it I will be super sad. So keep on trucking because I cannot wait to see what happens next! :))))))
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  • From ANON - mnfm on July 30, 2011
    I've been following this story since part 1 and I've liked it so much. Its one of the few I look forward to. Everything about it is great and you don't need to change it or adapt it for anyone. Sometimes that's the problem with authors that write for reviews; they get lost and discouraged trying to do what everyone wants.

    Write your story the way you want. Write it for yourself. If we review fine, if we don't fine!; and don't even bother with the flames or the requests. This is not a democracy, this is YOUR STORY.

    So there, I said my piece. Now I shall await for your next... ;)
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  • From leValkyrie on July 30, 2011
    Ooh great chapter, I can't wait to see who is going to open the door. And poor Hermione, it just seems that she can't catch a break from those horny dominants. Wait, is that really a bad thing tho? LOL As far as negative reviews go, excuse my language, but fuck them! I don't even know what any of them can complain about. It is not them writing this wonderful creative piece, it is you. I know that I do not often review, but please know that from now on I shall always review. If that is what it takes to keep this wonderful story going, I will keep reviewing. This story is awesome. The way you describe the relationships between the dominants and the subs, as well as the relationship between Hermione and the Eldest and Dominants is so rich. I feel very connected to many of these characters. I think this story is awesome, and I beg you to continue writing. I am in love and I will surely be sad if you decide to stop.
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  • From ANON - severus_snake on July 30, 2011
    Don't listen to those that are giving you negative feedback and want you to change things. I love your story and I love the directions that you are taking it. I always look forward to more. Thank you for writing!
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  • From purefaith91 on July 30, 2011
    Poor Hermione. You would have thought that someone would have explained it all to her in advance. And they should have known, since she was almost due to be in heat, that she needed her underwear. Also, they should have put more guards on her for the same reason. It is a wonder she does not turn inside all of the time with each new experience being as bad or worse than the last...at the very least, completely different from anything she has experienced. Very interesting. p
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  • From apless2645 on July 30, 2011
    Dont let the negative reviews get to ya hun. I think you are doing an amazing job and can't wait for your new chapters! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Pheonix on July 30, 2011
    okay so i beg you please please please please please please please PLEASE!!! continue this it is amazing and wonderful and i loves it so much! i just finished rereading the first one and this one I am so happy you added another chapter!.
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