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By : grugster
  • From ANON - Molto Gordissimo on July 30, 2011
    This is a good story, at times even a great story, and pretty damn hot, too; but that's because you wrote it the way you wanted. Don't listen to destructive criticism. Stick with what you've started, and bring it home as you imagined. It's easy to be a critic, especially a dull and unimaginative one. It's a whole lot harder to be a writer. I know, I've tried, and though I haven't yet produced anything that I would be comfortable puttng out there, I am very much aware of how much work is involved in even getting started. If there are folks here who don't like what you do, suggest that they try to write even one chapter of their own story, and then come back and continue their cricism. I doubt many of them will be heard from again. All the best,
    Gordissimo

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  • From ANON - mnc on July 30, 2011
    I love your story! i wouldn't want you to change a thing! keep it up 'cause i'm dying to know what happens next!!
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  • From ANON - GuiltyPleasure on July 30, 2011
    Please don't let negative reviewers impact your view of the story. There will always be people in the world who want something different from the stories they read. In my mind, I have completely rewritten the 7th Harry Potter book to fit what I would like to see. While I adored all of the books, I can't help but imagine it in a way that is my ideal. You can never please everyone as an author, and I truly think it is most important to write the story in a way that makes you happy. And I for one LOVE this story and truly look for updates every day or two. I adore Hermione's relationships with the other characters, and your version of pack life and what it means to be a werewolf is so well thought out and original. I would be truly saddened to hear that some negative reviews affected your vision of the story or your desire to share the story with others.
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  • From purefaith91 on July 30, 2011
    It is disheartening to see that there are those that feel the need to make negative remarks to an author. If it bothers me, I can imagine what it feels like to you (and apparently countless others). It is one thing to comment on the characters in a story (positively or negatively) as it is a sign that the reader is able to become involved in your story, a testament to just how good it is. My question is, why do they continue to read if they find it offensive? It is not like it is required reading. Maybe you should just forward the remarks back to the sender marked "disinterested in your opinions" and not let it put a damper on your day or your love of writing this and other stories. If you see it becoming negative, email back and delete from the reviews. Good luck and I will keep reading if you keep writing. p
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  • From ANON - Ilovekc on July 30, 2011
    I like your story. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Mary on July 30, 2011
    MOAR
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  • From ANON - abm62 on July 30, 2011
    Hope everything is ok? Missed reading your story and became concerned. Love this story and you plot and character development. Hope you will be able to continue the story. Take care.
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  • From ANON - Eleanor on July 27, 2011
    Is this story finished now? :(
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  • From ANON - LoveDarkness on July 21, 2011
    Update soon please
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  • From CurlyIIsu on July 18, 2011
    Awesome story, I would like to see another full moon, when Hermoine acts normal again ;)
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  • From ANON - wannabewolfe on July 12, 2011
    This was another very interesting chapter. It has to be so difficult for Hermione to know when to trust her gut feelings and when to hold back.
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  • From katiekrm on July 05, 2011
    I thought of something else to add. I think part of the reason I was so disappointed that Hermione was punished so badly, for things that I feel are more her learning the werewolf culture and understandably being an emotional wreck, is that I was expecting her to get back some of her own power by getting Neville and Draco to stand up for themselves and test their rights in the pack, which I was greatly looking foward to. Instead of that, it's proven yet again how little power she has. I also feel like Severus is violating her privacy with this constant mind reading. I don't think her mates are doing that great of a job at explaining the pack culture, danger, and rules to her and tending to her emotional needs. Give the bookworm some books already! I so wish she'd reject Ages after this. That being said, I'm dying to know what happens next. Dying! This world you've created is very interesting.
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  • From winter748 on July 02, 2011
    It seems that not thinking IS Hermione problem so I don't know why they keep telling her she is thinking too much. All she does is react on an emotional level. No one has sat her down & said here are the werewolves rules/laws and what we expect or here's some books for you to study. She is not reasoning or researching or discussing anything. It's like she is mentally deficeint now. Where is our bossy swot who literally drug 3 boys through classes and set revision schedules? There have been no thoughts of grief for her friends & parents. No thoughts of what is happening in the wizarding/muggle world and what Voldy is doing. She hasn't asked one coherent question or made one coherent explanation of her worries or thoughts. She's just been going from sex scene to punishment scene & back to sex scene. I do like your writing style and this version of werewolves that you have created is fasinating, but I'm getting bored and frustrated. If there's more going on, then I feel the reader needs to be in on that somewhat, even if Hermione isn't. I accept that Fenrir is nothing like canon and you have developed some truly interesting original characters, but if Hermione isn't going to be at least somewhat like our Hermione, you might have as well made her an OC which may have been better because I wouldn't be having expectations. I make these statements respectfully and with the understanding that you certainly have the right to write your story as you see fit. I will still be reading. Thank you.
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  • From xoburntofferingsxo on July 02, 2011
    I like it and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From CafeAuLait on July 01, 2011
    I read this story on a whim, well let me backtrack a bit, I read part one on a whim and I liked it. The sequel is okay but there is entirely to much sex and not enough substance. I really like the world you created, it's interesting. I'm always happy when the only warning is 'drama' or plot because I actually feel as if the story is moving. I think you need to take the angst further than one chapter, some of those chapters read more like a plot devices than a true contributions to the plot, which I'm still trying to figure out. This story is seriously in want of angst, something that the original had. I sometimes think you should have put PWP in the writing because there is more porn than plot.

    I know my review may come of harsh, but that's only because I believe this story has the potential to be so much more than sex, it would be nice if you mixed it up more.
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