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By : grugster
  • From MalfoysBitch on July 01, 2011
    ok, so the punishment wasnt toooo bad, and hermione really seems to be comming to terms with been a warewolf!
    Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - theladykt on July 01, 2011
    men are idiots. They dont even bother to findout why she did what she did so they can prevent it from happening again. Ah well
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  • From ANON - thestralhorse on June 30, 2011
    poor Hermione she is so sad, but it is an awesome chapter!! All the interaction with the mates was great, thank you so much for posting it made my day and i can't wait for the next chapter =)
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  • From sarahdaye9 on June 30, 2011
    As always, I love it! Maybe this will help Hermione get more into the groove of being submissive.
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  • From ANON - amarie on June 30, 2011
    mmm i really don't know what to say after reading this chapter. A part of me wants to stop reading, i understand she is a sub but even them have a backbone , they way she is being treated is like a child . None of them should get any action , specially Ages , i mean maybe this way they will learn that she isn't like other subs and give her space to be herself maybe this will lead to a better situation for everyone. i have been reading since the 1st one but never wrote a review , today's chapter rubbed me the wrong way . will be giving one more chapter a try before making my mind i would hate to stop reading but you have taken what makes Hermione well Hermione i understand OOC , but this is like reading a completely different character. Love your writing and hope to read more of your stories in the future.
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  • From katiekrm on June 30, 2011
    This is one of my most anticipated updates every week. I don't really know what to say about this chapter. I'm one of the ones who doesn't want her to be quite so submissive. They're not giving her anything to do that she loves. They punish her when she's still learning. I kind of wanted her to hate Ages after her punishment and ask him to leave her alone. And like she said in her head, they haven't provided her with winter clothes. I'd like to see Hermione not be happy with them and refuse them affections. That being said, I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From sbrande on June 30, 2011
    Great chapter. I like that fact that Hermione is struggling with her wolf, it makes it more plausible.

    Keep up the great work.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From coopershawk on June 30, 2011
    Great chapter. Interesting how her "wolf" is reacting.
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  • From sbrande on June 23, 2011
    Excellent! Just read both this chapter and the last. I do wonder what Hermione's punishment shall be though.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From ANON - Bells on June 23, 2011
    I love this story, I just have a hard time thinking of Hermione as so submissive and so unlike the powerful woman she is. I can almost see her giving up and trying suicide like she thought of in the last chapter. But I can't wait to see where you are taking this
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  • From theladykt on June 23, 2011
    cant blame her. i'd be wanting to get away from all those jerks too. one or two "bosses" are bad enough but she got bunches.
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  • From ANON - Silanae on June 22, 2011
    Just dropping by to say that I'm really enjoying your story and that I agree with you. It will take her time to understand just where she is, which rules simply have to be accepted and which can be worked around with some careful manipulation. Heck, she's among werewolves, not nice humans who only have (rational) human thoughts and emotions. There's the whole instinct of the wolf side to keep in mind too. Once she comes to terms with that, then it will become easier for her to know what she can or cannot change and work on having more control over her life. As long as she keeps thinking as a human and keeps seeing everyone as only humans, she'll keep running into problems such as these no doubt.

    But yes, all in all, I rather like this story and hope you keep up the good work. :)
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  • From MalfoysBitch on June 22, 2011
    Oh poor hermione!! I just want to give her a hug!! I hope Ages and her mates are not to hard on her in the next chapter!!
    Love the story! Love the way of the wolf set up!! Keep up the amazing work!!
    Also...
    Update Soon!!
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  • From ANON - purpleann on June 22, 2011
    Seriously, Hermione is a bad girl. When is she going to learn her place???? I'm interested to see what her punishment will be, and how her mates will react (and the Elders!!!) to her trying to run away. I laughed when Draco said he wanted to spank her too - that's hilarious. I can't imagine Hermione letting that happen AT ALL. Great job as always!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on June 22, 2011
    I don't even no what to say right now.....Really,NOOOOOOOO,why me? But all them are how I feel. This is why we keep coming back because you leave us wanting SO MUCH MORE. I love this story and when I got to just about to the end I had to stop because there is wasnt a next chapter. but after my little tantrum lol because I couldnt read more I finished the last few sentence, which only left me wanting more. That is my only problem with reading WIP, but know that your amazing because your story is the only WIP I am reading, but also I know that this is a real WIP not something that will be updated ever three months. But like alway, I can't wait for the next chapter, I will keep looking for it.lol your the best.
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