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By : grugster
  • From ANON - angeles on June 22, 2011
    People will never be line up with your story.... In my case I simply love it!!!!!!!!! Is different, sexy and very very entretaining.
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  • From ANON - She Ain't No Blondie on June 21, 2011
    What a great chapter! I really enjoy seeing Hermione being more defiant and choosing her own actions. Being submissive to so many betas gets tiring, and it's nice to see her frustrations and how she makes her decision. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - xoburntofferings on June 21, 2011
    I liked it very much. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From coopershawk on June 21, 2011
    Great chapter. Interesting that Hermione ran. As a Gryffindor I wouldn't have expected her to run. Was she that desperate or afraid or was her wolf reacting? Wonder what her mates will do? The punishment okay. But how will they handle her escape attempt? Thanks very much for writing this story and this chapter.
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  • From bloodshound on June 20, 2011
    oh you silly puppy. 1 step forward, 4 steps back. As plans go that was pretty rubbish, sweety. Never plan when you're angry. Now, you'll be more restricted than ever.

    Also, I didn't hear back from you. may I use your world?
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  • From ANON - abm on June 20, 2011
    Another great chapter! Thank you!
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  • From katiekrm on June 20, 2011
    I still don't want Hermione to be too badly punished. I just wish they would try harder to see things from her point of view. I do love this fic, though, and it was killing me waiting for this chapter. What she did, she did out of love and concern for Severus. And let's face it, her mates suck at communication. She still doesn't understand their ways.
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  • From ANON - colao on June 20, 2011
    It's like slowing down to check out a car accident...I'm curious to see what happens next...
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  • From ANON - thestralhorse on June 20, 2011
    I my goodness!!!!!!! This chapter is so good, I feel so bad for Hermione and all her mates they are just confusing each other more and more which made it a totally perfect chapter and i can't wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - GuiltyPleasure on June 20, 2011
    I just love this story. I am so excited for each new chapter. I'm interested to see how all of the mates react to Hermione's escape attempt.
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  • From ANON - Bbajshdkwksbs on June 20, 2011
    Much too short! Please update soon!!
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  • From sarahdaye9 on June 20, 2011
    Love it! Can't wait until Hermione gets to know her wolf, but I imagine that won't be for awhile. I totally understand the dominance thing though and am really enjoying her struggles!
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  • From Jewels812 on June 20, 2011
    I can't wait for another chapter....it is very confusing and I can totally see how Hermione is having issue with the way they do things....my goodness she doesn't even know she is doing something wrong since no one tells her anything until after something has occured...i would be frustrated too....
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  • From ANON - lele on June 17, 2011
    I love your story its one of the best iv ever seen I cant wait till your next chapter this is one of few stories that I have the patients and intrest to read thanks alot and keep up the awesome writing. :)
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  • From ANON - secretq quill on June 16, 2011
    please give hermione some power. i understand the positions when they have sex, but this is hermione! she would stand up for what she believes is right, and how in the world could she be happy if shes going to be bullied into silence all the time!?
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