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By : grugster
  • From StillHorny on June 12, 2011
    Ah, such a young inexperianced, but passionate, pup. What is the clan to do? Espcially the head beta, who is also one of her mates.

    This next chapter should prove very interesting, enlightening, and painful (for the pup, that is).

    Can't wait.
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  • From ANON - Betty on June 11, 2011
    Hey i loveeee ur story!!!
    I think it wuld b really cool if u had gotten hermione to escape into the forest where she gets lost and could perhaps run into a few death eaters and who beta then fenrir to save her=]
    Plzzzz keep writin!!
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  • From BillysBaby253 on June 10, 2011
    i cant wait till the next chapter. :) just one quick question though. ive been wondering this for a while. will bill or remus be in the story at any point?
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  • From winter748 on June 09, 2011
    I patiently waited as I know this isn't your total life focus but OMG where you left chapter 27 I don't think I can stand waiting. Poor Severus. It's hard to remember that he's a fairly new werewolf also and is probably still having issues adapting. Thanks for a great story.
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  • From purpleann on June 09, 2011
    okay, Dorothea is awesome and it's hilarious how she picks on Severus. If he's not accepting his wolf, then I guess he needs to be shown his place. Why can't Hermione get that? I'm interested in what her devious plan is, although I'm pretty sure she's just going to end up with a blistering spanking for her trouble.
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  • From bloodshound on June 09, 2011
    I had a question on the sale of subs... a few actually. if subs are valuable, why sell them? is it punishment? They;re not clicking with the pack? The pack has to many (though I was pretty sure you said they weren't that common or is that just super subs)? What? And Why?

    Secondly, I'd very much like to borrow your world for a bit. Not the characters so much, just the general set up and overview. I'd like to cross it over with some of my originals. I've got two or three scenarios in my head as I type.
    But I'm not going to do a thing without your permission.
    My email is ckestra@hotmail.com so pls contact me if you would. Thanks.
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  • From circe266 on June 09, 2011
    Oooh, it makes me so happy to see a new chapter!

    As always, I really like the way you write the pack dynamic. I don't even mind Dorothea instigating a little Severus/Ages action, though I wish we would also gotten some Hermione/Yorik too.

    However, it does bother me that it looks like Hermione is about to be punished yet again simply for having her own mind and behaving in a way that is natural for someone who didn't grow up as a wolf, especially given that it doesn't seem like anyone has really bothered to give her the full scoop on what is OK/not OK and what is expected of her. For me, it is starting to go a too far beyond the sexy dom/sub dynamic -- I don't like how unfair it is, and it makes me like the dominant characters a little less each time it happens. I hope for the sake of the character that Hermione is finally able to "win" this time.

    I'll be waiting patiently (and eagerly!) for your next update.
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  • From ANON - sup on June 09, 2011
    Absolutely great chapter. I'm dying to find ut what Hermione plans!
    I hope you'll post a new one soon! :)
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  • From coopershawk on June 09, 2011
    I still like Dorothea. It hasn't mattered to me how long it takes before chapters are posted. I'm just grateful that you're writing this sequel. Love your stories. Thank you for finding the time to write what you have done. I must admit I do check frequently to see if you've updated but the suspense is good for me.
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  • From rayhansd on June 08, 2011
    Again, I love this story! Fenrir and Hermione's interaction is my favorite. Thank you for updating!
    I feel like this Hermione is pretty bratty and not as intelligent as we all like but I'm waiting to see how you user her in the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - IdrilLuinwe on June 08, 2011
    Oh dear... Hermione is in big trouble now! Thank-you for updating when you can; I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 08, 2011
    ohhhh i am on the edge of my seat, i want to know what Hermione's plan is!!!! awesome chapter, i loved the interplay between the head alpha and head beta =)
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  • From bloodshound on June 08, 2011
    Who's pestering you? That's so unfair. people need to learn that writers have their own lives to and to just appriciate what we are given, when we are given it... poo, now i sound like a sub. :P
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  • From bloodshound on June 08, 2011
    Dammit, she was only scared for him. She's still got some major trust issues going on there. Otherwise she'd know that he was unlikely to be truely hurt. I hope she doesn't catch to much hell for this cause since she was truely concerned. she doesn't seem happy at all with the status quo either. Sub doesn't mean door mat and she's a pup, not just a sub.
    In a way it's a pity ron and harry were killed off. They'd've made interesting wolves.
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  • From katiekrm on June 08, 2011
    In my opinion, they weren't fighting yet. I'm rooting for Hermione. If she does get punished, I so hope she punishes them in return. No sex! I really wanted to see Draco and Neville stand up to the bullies and refuse them sex. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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