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Reviews for Just Submit 2

By : grugster
  • From StarrCrystal on June 08, 2011
    Noooooooo!!!!! Why are all the best writers keep leaving me
    with clifthanger?!?! Ugh! I'll just have to wait for the next chapter
    I guess. But I can handle it. Just please for the love for all thats
    is good, please update as soon as possible! I feel I may die if I
    dont find out what is going to happen!
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  • From ANON - abm on June 08, 2011
    Please, please, please put the next chapter up ASAP! Love you story, love your writing.
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  • From MalfoysBitch on June 08, 2011
    Ok, So I understand that you have a life and what not!! But you can not leave us on such a cliffy! What is she going to do?!
    Loved this chapter - don't know why but I really dislike Severus in this story and usually he is one of my favourites! (I'm not bothered by this and I don't mean it as a negitive towards your story!) Loved that ages showed him his place... He's going to have to do that to Hermione isn't he... Poor girl, with her mind - how isnt she a dominant...
    Love this story!!
    Cant wait for the next update!! :)
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  • From sarahdaye9 on June 08, 2011
    Uhoh! Hope Hermione isn't going to do something dumb! Still loving your story, thank you for sharing your hard work with us.
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  • From ANON - QuintiliVare on June 08, 2011
    Oh please do update soon! I am so eager that I read the whole thing all over again! I can't wait for Janto and Torik to get together, I bet they would be halarious!! That and Hermione needs an excuse to cuddle with cute Janto, and Torik loves to cuddle! I'm also quite eager to see what ranks Fenrir gives her mates! *snicker* I get the feeling that he has an interesting sense of strength, and since he never has quite fallowed the rules, I can see at least one amusing rank happening.
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  • From purpleann on May 30, 2011
    Very intrigued by Hermione's devious plan! I can't wait to read more. I've been out of town so it was awesome to come back to TWO new chapters!!! The reunion w/ Fenrir was super hot, and I can never get enough of them together. I also actually really liked the scene with Ages. Knowing he was showing off for the visitors was kind of hot, actually. :)
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  • From ANON - wendy on May 28, 2011
    this chapter was awesome! haha I loobe Dorothy. can't wait for the next one :)

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  • From sbrande on May 28, 2011
    Thanking you for thus fantastic story. Just wanted to drop you a line and let you know to keep up the great work as I am loving this story.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From Kyliecoles on May 27, 2011
    Really love this story so far! Can't wait to read more.
    Am new to this site and I was wondering is there a way to find out
    When you have uploaded a new chapter? X x
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  • From coopershawk on May 26, 2011
    I really like Darius. He's a great character.
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  • From ANON - AmberDaze on May 26, 2011
    I have just read Just Submit and this story now as well - they are fantastic! Your descriptions make the social structure and wolf way of life totally believable and I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - april on May 25, 2011
    :) I'm excited for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Marianne Kret on May 24, 2011
    Love this story!!!!! Please never stop writing this. All those strong big men are fuel for my daydreaming haha. I always love stories were the characters are driven by animal instincts. So I very much liked the bite Severus gives Hermione at the end of this chapter. I also appriciated the humor. I would like to mention that I'm hoping for a little Fenrir/Yorik action again soon. Havent seen them together for a while now. They were great togheter. And the part were Ages almost reprimands Severus made me interested how that would actualy go between those two. See a little bit more about their relationship. Your work is appriciated and I love reading your stories. Greetings from Holland!
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  • From coopershawk on May 24, 2011
    I love the interaction with the Eldest. It's lots of fun. I really like the direction you're taking this story. I'm anticipating your next chapters with a great deal of glee. I miss Hermione's other mates when she is busy with others. I like the personalities of these mates. I'm very curious about Darius's conclusion.
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  • From TheOsiris on May 23, 2011
    Super awesome :)
    Just an awesome chapter I tell you
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