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By : grugster
  • From ANON - mali on May 22, 2011
    Great job! I really enjoyed the interaction with the elder! :) Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From bloodshound on May 22, 2011
    Mio's really starting to get a handle on things... so is thjat what a being a were does? It suppresses all the human memories?
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  • From dragongirl on May 14, 2011
    My dear old rebellious Hermione........... She will be punished! Outch!
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  • From bloodshound on May 14, 2011
    fiesty little thing, isn't she. I'm glad she's learning that sub doesn't mean doormat. I can understand her frustration though, she's still getting the hang of the culture shock from wizard to were, from 18 yr old independant to treasured sub pup. Is she allowed to ask questions about why they're forbidding this n that if she doesn't understand or is it do what your told when and how?
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  • From circe266 on May 14, 2011
    LOL, thanks for the warning! Although I would much, much rather read about Hermione with any/all of her other mates, your lemony scenes can be yummy even when the partner is grandfatherly (and painfully endowed).

    I loved the scene with Fenrir, so sweet and sexy. Fluffy Fenrir is so hot.

    Those bossy dominants better watch out for the revenge of the spunky pup! They'll be really sorry if she ever discovers the power of withholding sex not just from random men, but from her mates as well . . .
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  • From StillHorny on May 13, 2011
    Oh, a temper-tantrum Hermione...priceless!!!!

    Oh, the scene with Fenrir was HOT. Especially with the shackles against the wall!!!

    Ages is very clever. Take his hot and wet pup against the wall and have the other clan's leaders watch. I bet that made a BIG *wink* impression!!!

    I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 13, 2011
    Great chapter, i loved the Hermione and Fenrir heart to heart during sex!! sooo looking forward to find out what she is going to do with Igor and how she is going to get into Darius' good graces =)
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  • From TheOsiris on May 13, 2011
    I've been reading this story since part 1. I find your characterization to be very flushed out and your story flows very smoothly.I would read anything you write, just because you are awesome.

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  • From ANON - Jessica on May 06, 2011
    Cute I liked it, look forward to next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Nbrink on May 04, 2011
    Hey
    Just wanted to say you're very talented and this story is very interesting.
    Nice job
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  • From sbrande on May 04, 2011
    Another great chapter babe.

    Thanks.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From dragongirl on May 02, 2011
    I love when you involve the Elders in the situation. Poor Fenrir he doesn't know that he got his hands full with Hermione.......... LOL
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  • From purpleann on May 02, 2011
    I love the plotty chapters just as much as the smutty ones! This was interesting, to learn more about how the mate system works. So the sire, Darius, he is like her guardian of sorts? I do enjoy when the Elders drop by to school the dominants a bit. :) I hope the next chapter includes some Hermione/Fenrir smut, it's been a while since we've seen those two together. ! ! As always, great job & keep up the good work!
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  • From MalfoysBitch on May 01, 2011
    yeay!!! More fenrir! And a little more of the story and what the hell hermione is unfolds!! Loved it!! The elders are great! You always make them so funny! Again.... Thanks for more fenrir! He's not un stories enough!
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  • From ANON - kmjb on May 01, 2011
    this is an awsome story... please continue!!!! will Darius become one of her mates?
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